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Array ( [sid] => 69385 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loving The Storm [time] => 2004-10-29 20:22:50 [hometext] => impromptu...please comment [bodytext] => Thunder rolls
Through this hollow soul
And lightning flows
Through these veins
Like a war, it goes on
Like a war...it kills
Kills feelings
And suffocates conciousness
Coma takes hold
And darkness slips in
Screaming, sobbing
But light prevails
The light so beautiful
Like love
And love saves
When darkness seeps
Through lacerations
Caused by darkness
Love saves
When thunder collapses your soul
And love saves
When lightning
Shorts you out
Your love saved me
When darkness was closing its wounds
...My wounds
Like sun shining through storm clouds
Your love shone through me
And still shines [comments] => 12 [counter] => 309 [topic] => 48 [informant] => eyesxcriedxout1989 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Loving The Storm

Contributed by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:22:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Thunder rolls
Through this hollow soul
And lightning flows
Through these veins
Like a war, it goes on
Like a war...it kills
Kills feelings
And suffocates conciousness
Coma takes hold
And darkness slips in
Screaming, sobbing
But light prevails
The light so beautiful
Like love
And love saves
When darkness seeps
Through lacerations
Caused by darkness
Love saves
When thunder collapses your soul
And love saves
When lightning
Shorts you out
Your love saved me
When darkness was closing its wounds
...My wounds
Like sun shining through storm clouds
Your love shone through me
And still shines

Copyright © eyesxcriedxout1989 ... [ 2004-10-29 20:22:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by emocutie07 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:58:41 PM AEST
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Breath takingly beautiful,..I wanted to think of something really clever to say, but it just left me absolutely speechless, just as all your others have ....all the usual hearts to you my luv

Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:08:40 PM AEST
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pretty good wish i came up with sumthing like that

Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:26:47 AM AEST
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I love happy endings..thanx

Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by EVERxSOxSWEET on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:39:57 PM AEST
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I like your poetry..PM me sometime

Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:25:56 PM AEST
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It IS breathtaking!

Fantastic use of thunder and storm
expressing love.

--Mothy

Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:07:38 PM AEST
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wow this was...I dont even have the words to say just know this it was great as a poem and it can be great as a song...keep it up...

much love,
Dani

Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 04:03:59 AM AEST
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beautifully worded work, well done.

wildejohnny.

Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:29:25 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. I love the ending.

Spazzo

Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by namesaretaken on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:10:47 PM AEST
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A gentle touch will overcome rage and anger every time----

After reading this poem I will filled with a sense of peace and happiness
good stuff thanks

Nat

Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:04:31 PM AEST
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Awesome write. You have a way with words

Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:52:42 AM AEST
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Beautifull! How strong the bond of love can be. Love really lifts the soul & carries one through many storms. Excellent write.
Nice job.

Corinna

Re: Loving The Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Monday, 7th February 2011 @ 04:01:59 PM AEST
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emotion is often as turbulent as the sea, or as erratic as a thunder storm. Great job expressing yourself, and how love makes you feel. I also have written several poems on love.

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