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Array ( [sid] => 69334 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It's A Little Too Late [time] => 2004-10-29 11:59:34 [hometext] => Bad Day! [bodytext] => When my world lay shattered
Beneath my shaking feet
You stomped on my damaged soul
With your empty promises
Now you want me to
Believe I can trust you
Well baby...
It's a litle too late.

When my body
Was burning with passion
You doused the flame
With your false accusations
Now you want to be my lover again
Well baby...
It's a litle too late.

When I was begging
For your love
You crushed my
Broken soul...
And my
Bleeding heart...
In the palm of your cruel hands
Now you say
You love me
Well baby...
It's a litle too late.

When I was crying
The tears fell
Glistening from my eyes
They glitered down my checks
Falling at my feet
Now when they fall no more
You wish to dry them
Well baby...
It's a litle too late.

When I was thrashing
Around in self pity
When the pain
Was too much to bear
I stood alone
Drowning in a sea
Of my own regrets
Now you offer me comfort
Well baby...
It's a litle too late.

When I finally have
Something you want
You come crawling
On your lying knees
Begging me to take you back
Saying false words
Telling me your sorry
Well baby...
It's a litle to late.
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It's A Little Too Late

Contributed by skyblumoon on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:59:34 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



When my world lay shattered
Beneath my shaking feet
You stomped on my damaged soul
With your empty promises
Now you want me to
Believe I can trust you
Well baby...
It's a litle too late.

When my body
Was burning with passion
You doused the flame
With your false accusations
Now you want to be my lover again
Well baby...
It's a litle too late.

When I was begging
For your love
You crushed my
Broken soul...
And my
Bleeding heart...
In the palm of your cruel hands
Now you say
You love me
Well baby...
It's a litle too late.

When I was crying
The tears fell
Glistening from my eyes
They glitered down my checks
Falling at my feet
Now when they fall no more
You wish to dry them
Well baby...
It's a litle too late.

When I was thrashing
Around in self pity
When the pain
Was too much to bear
I stood alone
Drowning in a sea
Of my own regrets
Now you offer me comfort
Well baby...
It's a litle too late.

When I finally have
Something you want
You come crawling
On your lying knees
Begging me to take you back
Saying false words
Telling me your sorry
Well baby...
It's a litle to late.




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Re: It's A Little Too Late (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticpoet on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:05:55 PM AEST
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Hi
I like this a lot, It would make a great song


Re: It's A Little Too Late (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 12:27:49 PM AEST
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aww very deep and powerful write, you are not alone, *hugs* sorry you are feeling like this,

takecare, you know where I am

love pixie xx


Re: It's A Little Too Late (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 02:22:14 PM AEST
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Mystic's right... this would make a great song... just come up with a chorus to insert between each verse or every two verses...
A very powerful write though... keep writing...
~Donna~


Re: It's A Little Too Late (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 02:36:51 PM AEST
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fantastic. very strong write. it is little, by the way.


Re: It's A Little Too Late (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:02:41 AM AEST
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love it


Re: It's A Little Too Late (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:10:16 PM AEST
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Yes, with them it is always too little too late. Men, GRRRRRRRRRR. I like this, Blu.

Hugs,
Rita




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