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Array ( [sid] => 69328 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Quick And Bitter [time] => 2004-10-29 11:19:20 [hometext] => Bad Day! [bodytext] => If I could win an award
Off of hating someone
I would have the Golden Trophy.
I would be standing in the winners cicle
Taking in all the applause.
My smile would be genuine,
Instead of forced.
My laughter would be heart felt,
Instead of brittle.
My tears would be of genuine happiness,
Instead they fall quick and bitter.

If I could buy a house
With the pieces of my broken heart
I would own the worlds biggest mansoin.
It would have a million rooms.
One for each piece of my shattered soul.
My smile would be genuine,
Instead of forced.
My laughter would be heart felt,
Instead of brittle.
My tears would be of genuine happiness,
Instead they fall quick and bitter.

If I could buy a car
With the pieces of my empty mind
I would buy a Rolls Royce
I would parade all over town
Like the Queen of England
My smile would be genuine,
Instead of forced.
My laughter would be heart felt,
Instead of brittle.
My tears would be of genuine happiness,
Instead they fall quick and bitter.

If I could win the lottrey
Off the unlucky days I spend with you
I would be a millionare.
I could buy the world,
And condemn you straight to Hell.
My smile would be genuine,
Instead of forced.
My laughter would be heart felt,
Instead of brittle.
My tears would be of genuine happiness,
Instead they fall quick and bitter.


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Quick And Bitter

Contributed by skyblumoon on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:19:20 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



If I could win an award
Off of hating someone
I would have the Golden Trophy.
I would be standing in the winners cicle
Taking in all the applause.
My smile would be genuine,
Instead of forced.
My laughter would be heart felt,
Instead of brittle.
My tears would be of genuine happiness,
Instead they fall quick and bitter.

If I could buy a house
With the pieces of my broken heart
I would own the worlds biggest mansoin.
It would have a million rooms.
One for each piece of my shattered soul.
My smile would be genuine,
Instead of forced.
My laughter would be heart felt,
Instead of brittle.
My tears would be of genuine happiness,
Instead they fall quick and bitter.

If I could buy a car
With the pieces of my empty mind
I would buy a Rolls Royce
I would parade all over town
Like the Queen of England
My smile would be genuine,
Instead of forced.
My laughter would be heart felt,
Instead of brittle.
My tears would be of genuine happiness,
Instead they fall quick and bitter.

If I could win the lottrey
Off the unlucky days I spend with you
I would be a millionare.
I could buy the world,
And condemn you straight to Hell.
My smile would be genuine,
Instead of forced.
My laughter would be heart felt,
Instead of brittle.
My tears would be of genuine happiness,
Instead they fall quick and bitter.






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Re: Quick And Bitter (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:20:49 AM AEST
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awww *hugs* I am sorry that you are feeling so down at the moment ,fingers crossed that tomorrow will be a brighter day for you...

very good expression of your feelings of darkness,

takecare

pixie xx


Re: Quick And Bitter (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 02:35:34 PM AEST
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I love the way u structured this poem... it's again a very powerful write... thru the darkness of ur feelings come a genuine light... one of truth... the way u really feel deep down inside...
Take care...
~Donna~


Re: Quick And Bitter (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 02:45:30 PM AEST
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great write. kind of song like.


Re: Quick And Bitter (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:32:59 PM AEST
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Aw that's kinda sad but I know the feeling.


Re: Quick And Bitter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:15:47 PM AEST
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Blu, I am so sorry, sweetie. I have been there and felt all those things.

Love,
Rita




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