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we went through hell
but it got better
now all is well

my pains I have
but are deep within
my new new life
now begins

I took a little
I gave alot
I felt my work wasted
but it was not

For we are together
and with her I will be
for she helps me cope
with my misery

She makes me smile
which is rare
I found a life
when mine was bare
this goood new life
which now we share

When to me
my life was a loss
she grew on me
like a sweetmoss

now I win
again and again
for she makes me smile
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Depth of my smile

Contributed by crash on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:34:58 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

We went through hurt
we went through hell
but it got better
now all is well

my pains I have
but are deep within
my new new life
now begins

I took a little
I gave alot
I felt my work wasted
but it was not

For we are together
and with her I will be
for she helps me cope
with my misery

She makes me smile
which is rare
I found a life
when mine was bare
this goood new life
which now we share

When to me
my life was a loss
she grew on me
like a sweetmoss

now I win
again and again
for she makes me smile
deep within

Copyright © crash ... [ 2004-10-29 07:34:58]
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Re: Depth of my smile (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:40:50 AM AEST
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nice tribute. but i can`t get to know who gets the tribute anyway nice to share your joys and i even could smile

Re: Depth of my smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:09:49 AM AEST
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I loved this one. It was really cool. I am glad you have a positive outlook after going through hell. Most people loath in self pity and their misery, but you had the courage to try again. I really liked the way you wrote this. It was simple and simply delightful!

Re: Depth of my smile (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:29:19 AM AEST
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Very deeply emotional write.
I can relate to it.

Re: Depth of my smile (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:32:03 AM AEST
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a great ending, :) glad that you and your girl have pulled through the hard times, love aint never easy lol, emotional and deep, a great write,

pixie xx

Re: Depth of my smile (User Rating: 1 )
by lilracer37 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:41:02 AM AEST
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It was an overall really good poem, I just wish the guy I'm in love with felt the same way about me as you do about your girl. If she makes you feel that special dont lose her.

Re: Depth of my smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:06:56 PM AEST
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fantastic write.

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