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Array ( [sid] => 69260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => its my birthday [time] => 2004-10-28 20:14:14 [hometext] => this has been the worste week of my life.......happy birthday to me!!!! [bodytext] => this doesn't really ryme,
but life is a crime
need someone to talk to
no one bothers half the time
happy birthday to me
life is down the drain
how i wish for rain
can't stand another day
just let me fade away
happy birthday to me
this week has been hell
feel like falling in a well
but if you ask me i'll say i'm fine
no one knows what i feel
i can't tell who is real
happy birthday to me
you lied again
i cried again
what a wonderful god that let me down again
what nice names you call me
happy birthday to me
ain't i suppose to feel happy today?
be bonnie and gay?
i feel so cold so alone
so scared so unaware
happy birthday to me

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its my birthday

Contributed by alyssakoren_03 on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:14:14 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

this doesn't really ryme,
but life is a crime
need someone to talk to
no one bothers half the time
happy birthday to me
life is down the drain
how i wish for rain
can't stand another day
just let me fade away
happy birthday to me
this week has been hell
feel like falling in a well
but if you ask me i'll say i'm fine
no one knows what i feel
i can't tell who is real
happy birthday to me
you lied again
i cried again
what a wonderful god that let me down again
what nice names you call me
happy birthday to me
ain't i suppose to feel happy today?
be bonnie and gay?
i feel so cold so alone
so scared so unaware
happy birthday to me

Copyright © alyssakoren_03 ... [ 2004-10-28 20:14:14]
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Re: its my birthday (User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:28:24 PM AEST
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I like your poem even thro its sad :( Ive felt like this on lots of birthdays too... But there have been some good ones as well. I hope all the ones ahead of you are great ones.
Take Care and Happy Birthday Hugs
~Lovingangel4u~

Re: its my birthday (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:03:30 PM AEST
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great write. hope you have a good birthday. youll have better ones if it doesnt look up =]

Re: its my birthday (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 03:01:57 PM AEST
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Hey....we have the same birthday and mine sucked too. LOL I know how ya feel. I read a couple of your poems, I will go read more soon. You are a good poet. Let the ink flow! Tiffany J. (Red_October)

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