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Love Story
Contributed by
Red_October
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 01:56:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Love story-
A poet's glimpse of
Colorful glory...
An electrical prison
of fantasies driven
from within him.
Outcry, Outburst,
Outward explosion of
hopeless imagination
in his own emotional vision.
And he inhales it,
Vigorously -
And it envelopes him,
Simultaneously -
And he consumes it,
Desperately -
And it finishes him,
Finally.
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2004-10-28 13:56:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love Story
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_bear on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 02:18:17 PM AEST (User
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I read it
eagerly..
embraced it
tightly
loved it
wholly..
I also love that user name..reminds me of a Sean Connery movie..ummm. Still hunting. LOL
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Re: Love Story
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:29:48 AM AEST (User
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Very nice . . .
Succinct and absorptive [sic?]. |
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Re: Love Story
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 06:21:19 PM AEST (User
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"Love story- ... And it finishes him, Finally."
Incredible ~
Nazmythian ~
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