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WHY I HOLD ON
Contributed by
goofyone
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:41:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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For the love, you gave me
I cannot replace,
I sit here in a puddle of tears,
I cry time and time again
You made me feel so warm,
You always made me smile,
I miss you so much
Why do I hold on?
Because of the smiles we shared,
For the tears that we shed
For the hugs you gave,
Till your arms went numb
That is why I hold on
Goofyone
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Re: WHY I HOLD ON
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:46:17 AM AEST
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awww beautiful and sad,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: WHY I HOLD ON
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:50:46 PM AEST
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WOw! I almost shed a few tears while reading it... I even read it twice and had the same affect... great piece of writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: WHY I HOLD ON
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by Clarity_Rising on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:23:31 PM AEST
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| Lovely, truely lovely... |
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