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Array ( [sid] => 69178 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Better Off Without Me [time] => 2004-10-28 09:02:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You would be better off without me
Don't bother asking
You know it's the truth

For all the times I screwed up
For all the times I lied to you
You deserve someone better

That someone better I understand is your friend
I'm sure she'd make you happier than I would
Our love was doomed from the very beginning

I want to give up so badly
But something keeps holding me back
It's lust...& lust is a terrible thing

I've grown tired to trying
It's getting me no where
Why should I bother to continue

I know you know this is about you
It's pretty damned obvious
You know you'd be better off with out me

*Cries* [comments] => 4 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 52 [informant] => RhythmBndt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Better Off Without Me

Contributed by RhythmBndt on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:02:33 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

You would be better off without me
Don't bother asking
You know it's the truth

For all the times I screwed up
For all the times I lied to you
You deserve someone better

That someone better I understand is your friend
I'm sure she'd make you happier than I would
Our love was doomed from the very beginning

I want to give up so badly
But something keeps holding me back
It's lust...& lust is a terrible thing

I've grown tired to trying
It's getting me no where
Why should I bother to continue

I know you know this is about you
It's pretty damned obvious
You know you'd be better off with out me

*Cries*

Copyright © RhythmBndt ... [ 2004-10-28 09:02:33]
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Re: Better Off Without Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:05:13 AM AEST
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can feel your hurt in this one *hugs* dont give up, all your fighting and trying will be worth it in the end,

takecare

pixie xx

Re: Better Off Without Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:28:03 AM AEST
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Ditto to everything pixie just said.

Re: Better Off Without Me (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticpoet on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 10:28:49 AM AEST
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It's amazing how poetry can be a healer of hurts and pain. It's a place to vent your feelings - I definately can feel the pain you are feeling. Good Luck, life does get better.

Re: Better Off Without Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:26:53 AM AEST
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Lust is a terrible thing. Hang in there. Better things can happen very quickly.
Stitch

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