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[aid] => mick
[title] => elusive romance
[time] => 2004-10-28 00:40:55
[hometext] => okay, this is completely different than my usual bitter poems.
[bodytext] => the moon was full and the sky was clear, and i can still feel your words mouthed into my ear. the perfect combination of silent touch. you've made the top of my thoughts, and when i sleep, its of tonite that i'll be dreaming. staring into the sky, slipping into a reverie, a fond memory. one casual stroll across the waters lip and you've already stolen my sense of balance. a blast of wind stroking my neck, my hand in yours. conversation kiss; im speechless within my speech. and with you i'll forever be counting the stars in my mind. oh, elusive romance.
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elusive romance
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crimsondream
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Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:40:55 AM in AEST
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the moon was full and the sky was clear, and i can still feel your words mouthed into my ear. the perfect combination of silent touch. you've made the top of my thoughts, and when i sleep, its of tonite that i'll be dreaming. staring into the sky, slipping into a reverie, a fond memory. one casual stroll across the waters lip and you've already stolen my sense of balance. a blast of wind stroking my neck, my hand in yours. conversation kiss; im speechless within my speech. and with you i'll forever be counting the stars in my mind. oh, elusive romance.
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Re: elusive romance
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:47:40 AM AEST
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Well it's a great write and I'm sure u must be feeeling great.
Keep up the happy stuff cause our planet needs happy.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: elusive romance
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 07:47:03 AM AEST
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| Great write. You should think of writing more of this type......Mike |
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