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Array ( [sid] => 69142 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fading Seasons [time] => 2004-10-27 22:50:05 [hometext] => 'We all began in perfect seasons, seeking out hopes, dreams and inspirations. But in the ending we will all fade and thence disappear, tired out by the unending jests and false hopes of seasons'. [bodytext] => Where is the promise of spring,
in the fall of years,
Where is the hopes of summer,
in the grey of winters.

Are we not like falling rain,
to fall in much rancour,
only to seep to the ground,
and then be lost forever.

Are we not like dew drops,
such cold caress of elegence,
only to dry away,
by the sun's magnificence.

Are we not like snowy flakes,
such beauteous designs,
only to fall away,
undistinguished in snowy banks.

Are we not like fading seasons,
to wake to every promise,
but to lose all hope and reason,
at the fade of every chorus.

'...I am the remnant of what I was, the remains of who I am... if only for but a while I appreciated all that was, for all I am now are memories of yesteryears...' ~ Baronhawk [comments] => 6 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Fading Seasons

Contributed by Baronhawk on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:50:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Where is the promise of spring,
in the fall of years,
Where is the hopes of summer,
in the grey of winters.

Are we not like falling rain,
to fall in much rancour,
only to seep to the ground,
and then be lost forever.

Are we not like dew drops,
such cold caress of elegence,
only to dry away,
by the sun's magnificence.

Are we not like snowy flakes,
such beauteous designs,
only to fall away,
undistinguished in snowy banks.

Are we not like fading seasons,
to wake to every promise,
but to lose all hope and reason,
at the fade of every chorus.

'...I am the remnant of what I was, the remains of who I am... if only for but a while I appreciated all that was, for all I am now are memories of yesteryears...' ~ Baronhawk

Copyright © Baronhawk ... [ 2004-10-27 22:50:05]
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Re: Fading Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 11:15:17 PM AEST
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Such a melancholy write! Gosh... this tugs at my heart. Seriously, Baronhawk - I hope everything ok... this is just so... well... gloomy. It's beautiful, but so sad.

I've missed having you about the place... and hope to see you around more often -
SNM

Re: Fading Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 02:57:09 AM AEST
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Sad but full with wisdom. Very strong write.
A masterpeice 2 all.
luv, huggs, smiles, hope,
emy

Re: Fading Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 07:28:05 AM AEST
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This blew me away! Very gloomy but true! Excellent write, but I hope you're not depressed. Take care and peace to you.
Thumps ; 0)

Re: Fading Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:37:39 PM AEST
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What a sad poem. I have no words that can
do this poem justice it was so beautiful and
honest... wow I am blown away... simply
blown away.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Fading Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:42:46 PM AEST
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wow...that rocked. it's so nice to read something like that. it's deep...thought-provoking, and beautiful.

Re: Fading Seasons (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:30:30 PM AEST
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B, I was very impressed and moved by your poem. Your theme was well handled and expressed with just enough anguish and despair at the passing of all things good and fresh and new. But then, we pass back into the cycle of things, which hopefully is an even greater journey.

Spike

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