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Array ( [sid] => 69129 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2004-10-27 21:21:50 [hometext] => plz read and comment [bodytext] => i am where i am
i am where i'll be
without a future
that i can see
each tear shed
for the life i had
for the life i lost
i feel like i lost it all
where to now
no going back
but there is nothing
in this streach of land ahead of me
that i can even pretend to wish to see
they have gone without me
into the world
of unknown fortune
but no more for me
its time to leave
goodbye my friends
i love you all
my future gone
heart crushed away
so now i say
so long good friends
may you enjoy it all [comments] => 3 [counter] => 291 [topic] => 43 [informant] => marsh62287 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Goodbye

Contributed by marsh62287 on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:21:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

i am where i am
i am where i'll be
without a future
that i can see
each tear shed
for the life i had
for the life i lost
i feel like i lost it all
where to now
no going back
but there is nothing
in this streach of land ahead of me
that i can even pretend to wish to see
they have gone without me
into the world
of unknown fortune
but no more for me
its time to leave
goodbye my friends
i love you all
my future gone
heart crushed away
so now i say
so long good friends
may you enjoy it all

Copyright © marsh62287 ... [ 2004-10-27 21:21:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:37:32 PM AEST
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it sounds like you are very sad and your heart was broken i can feel the sadness from this.. don't worry things get better .. there is always hope .. if something bad happened to break your heart or make you feel this way just remember you will become a stronger person and there will be a lesson learned.. stay strong and remember there is always hope .. great write though

Peace and hope

JENNA

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:05:11 PM AEST
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excellent write. but you have not lost your future. you cannot lose what you never had.

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 01:51:42 PM AEST
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Awesome write. Both Genna and E9 are right....
Jenni

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