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Array ( [sid] => 69122 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Heart Inside of Me [time] => 2004-10-27 20:14:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I take another step back
a little bit at a time
and I can see better now
how it all was such a crime

the way that you misled me
to believe you were sincere
I gave my heart to you
there was so little to fear

but it was just a ploy
to what end, I still don't know
I'm left here cold and empty
watching your back as you go

the days slowly wear on
I think maybe you'd get a clue
that you'd see your mistake
but you don't have it in you

you never once looked back
but if you did, you would see
I'm not as brave as I let on
there's a broken heart inside of me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 515 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lanna047 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Broken Heart Inside of Me

Contributed by lanna047 on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:14:27 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I take another step back
a little bit at a time
and I can see better now
how it all was such a crime

the way that you misled me
to believe you were sincere
I gave my heart to you
there was so little to fear

but it was just a ploy
to what end, I still don't know
I'm left here cold and empty
watching your back as you go

the days slowly wear on
I think maybe you'd get a clue
that you'd see your mistake
but you don't have it in you

you never once looked back
but if you did, you would see
I'm not as brave as I let on
there's a broken heart inside of me




Copyright © lanna047 ... [ 2004-10-27 20:14:27]
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Re: Broken Heart Inside of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 09:40:20 PM AEST
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wow this is a great write.. usually the person who left never admits they are wrong.. if they left you and turned their back on you then you can do better. you will heal.. There is always hope

Peace and hope

JENNA


Re: Broken Heart Inside of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:06:09 AM AEST
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It was a good poem, theres a broken heart inside of everybody i think.




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