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Array ( [sid] => 69105 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I cut myself [time] => 2004-10-27 17:56:22 [hometext] => I don't know anymore... Please leave comments to let me know what you think. [bodytext] => I cut myself because I made a mistake.
My blood slowly drips down my arm slowly oozing out of my sliced wound.
I didn't think it would be this bad.
I didn't mean to do it.
I wanted to be with you, I swear I did.
I cut myself, oops I cut myself again.... This time a little deeper,
How deep should I go?
The pain is nothing
Gosh the blood keeps coming,
It's okay you probably hate me, I wonder if I can kill myself?
I think I should this razor blade is pretty sharp.
I just took some pills to help me go numb.
I feel like dying
Would you care? Probably not.
I figured you wouldn't. Nice words never know till you try.. You gave me everything I needed.
Just one cut.
It didn't hurt to bad, so I did it again, now I am going numb...
I'm starting to cry; damn I don't want ot die. but who knows?
I wont know if any one cares till I'm gone.
I'm starting to work on my other arm now.
It only hurts for a little bit, the pain will go away...
OH GOD now it's really bad.
I can't help but think death is only around the corner.
I cut myself because I made a mystake;
I cut myself because I figured no one wanted me.
But I wont know till I try...
I guess it's too late. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 242 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Lovely_4_steve [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
I cut myself

Contributed by Lovely_4_steve on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 05:56:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I cut myself because I made a mistake.
My blood slowly drips down my arm slowly oozing out of my sliced wound.
I didn't think it would be this bad.
I didn't mean to do it.
I wanted to be with you, I swear I did.
I cut myself, oops I cut myself again.... This time a little deeper,
How deep should I go?
The pain is nothing
Gosh the blood keeps coming,
It's okay you probably hate me, I wonder if I can kill myself?
I think I should this razor blade is pretty sharp.
I just took some pills to help me go numb.
I feel like dying
Would you care? Probably not.
I figured you wouldn't. Nice words never know till you try.. You gave me everything I needed.
Just one cut.
It didn't hurt to bad, so I did it again, now I am going numb...
I'm starting to cry; damn I don't want ot die. but who knows?
I wont know if any one cares till I'm gone.
I'm starting to work on my other arm now.
It only hurts for a little bit, the pain will go away...
OH GOD now it's really bad.
I can't help but think death is only around the corner.
I cut myself because I made a mystake;
I cut myself because I figured no one wanted me.
But I wont know till I try...
I guess it's too late.




Copyright © Lovely_4_steve ... [ 2004-10-27 17:56:22]
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Re: I cut myself (User Rating: 1 )
by sid_the_tampon_fairy on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 06:22:43 PM AEST
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Wow. Powerful piece. Exteremly moving. I wish I could take ur pain away, i also wish I could tell u not to do it nemore, but i dont have that authority. If u ever need to talk im here! Great write!
Sid


Re: I cut myself (User Rating: 1 )
by surge_joebot on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 06:50:47 PM AEST
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Oh wow, that's intense, very personal and raw and so close to home for me, you put it into words that were so right and so simple and moving... i hope one day you can get what you need to make you better.

brilliant stuff
from demelza


Re: I cut myself (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:35:47 AM AEST
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yes, powerful and moving, i hope that one day you can find another release other than to cut yourself, as i have done it for years and i am still trying to stop doing it, you will get there, it may take some time, but you will,

takecare

pixie xx


Re: I cut myself (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 06:20:20 PM AEST
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wow thats awesome....i know this feeling all to well, sadly....but you put it into words so well...this is an excellent write....fantastic!!

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: I cut myself (User Rating: 1 )
by daydreamer22 on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 11:36:36 PM AEST
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hey grlie...nuthing can b that bad as to cut yourself...im pretty sure i kno u personally...and if this is who i think it is we r pretty good friends...and i dont want u to hurt yourself either way....there will always be someone out there that loves you...

Awaiting your next...
~*ME*~


Re: I cut myself (User Rating: 1 )
by daydreamer22 on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 11:37:19 PM AEST
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hey grlie...nuthing can b that bad as to cut yourself...im pretty sure i kno u personally...and if this is who i think it is we r pretty good friends...and i dont want u to hurt yourself either way....there will always be someone out there that loves you...

Awaiting your next...
~*ME*~




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