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[aid] => mick
[title] => Look at What You Done To Me
[time] => 2004-10-27 14:52:03
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[bodytext] => " Look at what You've Done To Me"
I was a happy carefree gal
No worries to call my own
I gave cared about those around me
But I don't care anymore
I have scars so deep
Wounds that no amount of time will ever heal
Will you just look?
At what you've done to me?
I trusted you with my life
In one fatal sweep you took all that from me
You swooped down on me like a bird of prey
I was your mouse
You chewed me up
You spit me out
You devoured me whole
Look at what you've done to me
I no longer want to live
No longer wanting to give to anyone
You took it all from me
There's not one scarp left of me
You raped me to core
You took
My heart...
My soul...
My body...
My dignity...
Like a thief in the night
Never to return no more
Take a good
Look at what you've done to me
I no longer
Eat...
Sleep...
Drink...
Go out...
Smile...
Laugh...
I'm scared all the time
Nothings funny anymore
My God
Look at what you've done to me
I sit alone...
Crying...
Dying...
Scared...
Lonely...
Shaken to the depths of my soul
Just take a long look.
At what you've done to me
There's nothing-good left inside.
No more dreams
Thanks to you
The dreams I once had
They're scattered like fallen leaves
No more illusions
There shattered like broken glass.
Look oh...
Look at what you've done to me...
You Losers...
You get to live free
I died when you raped me
I don't live
I survive with
The pain...
The guilt...
The remorse...
The anger...
The wounds...
The scars...
How could you do this to me?
Take a good
Look at what you've done to me...
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Look at What You Done To Me
Contributed by
skyblumoon
on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 02:52:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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" Look at what You've Done To Me"
I was a happy carefree gal
No worries to call my own
I gave cared about those around me
But I don't care anymore
I have scars so deep
Wounds that no amount of time will ever heal
Will you just look?
At what you've done to me?
I trusted you with my life
In one fatal sweep you took all that from me
You swooped down on me like a bird of prey
I was your mouse
You chewed me up
You spit me out
You devoured me whole
Look at what you've done to me
I no longer want to live
No longer wanting to give to anyone
You took it all from me
There's not one scarp left of me
You raped me to core
You took
My heart...
My soul...
My body...
My dignity...
Like a thief in the night
Never to return no more
Take a good
Look at what you've done to me
I no longer
Eat...
Sleep...
Drink...
Go out...
Smile...
Laugh...
I'm scared all the time
Nothings funny anymore
My God
Look at what you've done to me
I sit alone...
Crying...
Dying...
Scared...
Lonely...
Shaken to the depths of my soul
Just take a long look.
At what you've done to me
There's nothing-good left inside.
No more dreams
Thanks to you
The dreams I once had
They're scattered like fallen leaves
No more illusions
There shattered like broken glass.
Look oh...
Look at what you've done to me...
You Losers...
You get to live free
I died when you raped me
I don't live
I survive with
The pain...
The guilt...
The remorse...
The anger...
The wounds...
The scars...
How could you do this to me?
Take a good
Look at what you've done to me...
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skyblumoon
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2004-10-27 14:52:03]
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Re: Look at What You Done To Me
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 03:10:55 PM AEST
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heartfelt intense powerful write I feel your loniless and your pain Im very sorry that this happened to you if you ever need to talk you can pm me
Michelle |
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Re: Look at What You Done To Me
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 03:55:35 PM AEST
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YES!!! Definitely a very powerful write... I can certainly relate to what u are saying here... I've been there and down that!!! Walked that lonely road for about 20 years... never told a soul about what happened... that I regret!!!
Take care...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Look at What You Done To Me
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 04:19:16 PM AEST
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Hope your writing
helps you in some way.
I know many here will
offer their support.
--Mothy |
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Re: Look at What You Done To Me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:41:06 AM AEST
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awww *hugs* pain screams out of this poem, pain and suffering and feelings of helplessness, I wish I could take away your pain, I can offer you my support and friendship, powerful emotions,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Look at What You Done To Me
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 09:12:03 PM AEST
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this is so sad....and yet soo powerful......im sooo sorry for the pain that you feel....its good that you got it out tho....great write....so powerful
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Look at What You Done To Me
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by assassinatorgirl on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:49:29 PM AEST
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| wow that almost brought me to tears. because i know that feeling i had it for the longest time, and sometimes i still do. raped of my innocence, but not physically. emotionally. it was horrible i found out i couldn't trust anyone and i became so depressed. jeez, i feel like crying like i do when people remind me of how sad i feel. it's like i try to ignore it but people always somehow bring it up and then i just go into this weird trance-like thing because i want to hide from the pain because i can't bear it. i think i'm doomed to be reminded constantly of my inner battle. but this was a really good poem it was sad and that's my favorite kind because it makes me feel like someone understands. |
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Re: Look at What You Done To Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:21:01 PM AEST
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Blu, sweetpea, you are not the guilty one. Don't let him win this by totally destroying you. Throw this mantle of evil off and live. You can get past this. I know it is difficult but your life must go on and it might as well be happy. Fly like the eagle, baby, fly. Soar high over all and know you are loved and here on this earth for a reason. Be an eagle, Blu, be an eagle.
Much love,
Rita |
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