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Please don’t expect things to be as a whole,
As right now I don’t feel like smiling,
As on top of me heartache seems to be pilling.

I once was happy, in love & very secure,
After years of being one of depressions whores,
I had a man, who I had never hurt,
Now I have & he is wounded in the dirt.

My heart feels like someone has stood on it,
I can’t seem to escape from all my *****,
It follows me around like a lost puppy dog,
Placing me right in the middle of all this fog.

My soul was once full of joy & light,
Now it’s dull as depression holds on tight,
The chains have been wrapped around me again,
I can feel my whole body buckling under the strain.

Please hurt just take the knife & plunge it deep,
Then no longer will I be able to make others weep,
I don’t live I just exist in a world that is harsh & cruel,
I am definitely the loser in this life long duel.

I am a damaged girl, who has no real face,
Who has been cast into this dark, scary place,
I am down so deep down I can’t get out this time,
I try so hard to regain my strength & begin to climb.

But there’s nothing left in my reserves,
As to walk this earth no longer do I feel I deserve,
I am such a nasty & sadistic piece of craft work,
Who has been created by suffering & a lifetime of hurt.



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An Insight To My Heart & Soul

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 11:48:06 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I’ll give you an insight to my heart & soul,
Please don’t expect things to be as a whole,
As right now I don’t feel like smiling,
As on top of me heartache seems to be pilling.

I once was happy, in love & very secure,
After years of being one of depressions whores,
I had a man, who I had never hurt,
Now I have & he is wounded in the dirt.

My heart feels like someone has stood on it,
I can’t seem to escape from all my *****,
It follows me around like a lost puppy dog,
Placing me right in the middle of all this fog.

My soul was once full of joy & light,
Now it’s dull as depression holds on tight,
The chains have been wrapped around me again,
I can feel my whole body buckling under the strain.

Please hurt just take the knife & plunge it deep,
Then no longer will I be able to make others weep,
I don’t live I just exist in a world that is harsh & cruel,
I am definitely the loser in this life long duel.

I am a damaged girl, who has no real face,
Who has been cast into this dark, scary place,
I am down so deep down I can’t get out this time,
I try so hard to regain my strength & begin to climb.

But there’s nothing left in my reserves,
As to walk this earth no longer do I feel I deserve,
I am such a nasty & sadistic piece of craft work,
Who has been created by suffering & a lifetime of hurt.







Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-10-27 11:48:06]
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Re: An Insight To My Heart & Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 11:56:47 AM AEST
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Oh Pixie, I really feel for you. This is not a good day for me either.
I really hope it all works out for you.
Touching and emotional poem.

Love Dawny xxx


Re: An Insight To My Heart & Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 12:11:54 PM AEST
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aw pixie i'm sorry you're feeling so bad, your words express your emotion very deeply ... hope you feel better soon *


Re: An Insight To My Heart & Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 12:19:34 PM AEST
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This is a very emotinal and deep write. I hope the day gets better for you. I'm sending a hug to cheer you up.
Blu


Re: An Insight To My Heart & Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by pander on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 12:38:01 PM AEST
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What a powerful and moving piece this is. What more can I say other than once again up to the usual stunning standard I have come to know from your work

It still amazes me that someone experiencing so much pain can translate it into something so beautiful.

Your greatest fan,

Panda

x


Re: An Insight To My Heart & Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 12:55:39 PM AEST
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Pixie hang on in there. Life is full of ups and downs. You are just going through a phase of bad times. Along will come the good times embrace them for the sun will shine brightly once again.

Take care


Love Sweetangelukxxxxxx


Re: An Insight To My Heart & Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 12:57:16 PM AEST
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May I add a fantastic heartfelt poem.

May the good times come soon for you

Love SweetAngelukxxx


Re: An Insight To My Heart & Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 01:15:48 PM AEST
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I think this is one of your best. If things are meant to be with your guy, you will work it through and come out better. If not, maybe there is something better for you. I'll say a prayer.
Stitch


Re: An Insight To My Heart & Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:21:06 AM AEST
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I really wish there was something I could do to help.turn it around and go back to the happiness you were feeling. he will forgive you.




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