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[title] => Hopeless
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[bodytext] => I want to die, but I can't give you your way. That would make you to happy, to know I was so weak and hopeless. Well, I am weak and I am hopeless. So I wish that I could fly away from you, away from here, so I could be alone and stop hating. But that would never happen. I would never be able to be happy or content with anything. I will always be hopeless. I'm poisoned far too much, I won't ever be able to wake up from this nightmare called life. Life has consumed me and I'm doomed to it, I hate life.
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Hopeless
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LayDownPlayDead
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Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
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I want to die, but I can't give you your way. That would make you to happy, to know I was so weak and hopeless. Well, I am weak and I am hopeless. So I wish that I could fly away from you, away from here, so I could be alone and stop hating. But that would never happen. I would never be able to be happy or content with anything. I will always be hopeless. I'm poisoned far too much, I won't ever be able to wake up from this nightmare called life. Life has consumed me and I'm doomed to it, I hate life.
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Re: Hopeless
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 08:29:44 AM AEST
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| Good emotional write here! Well done! Rakerman1999 |
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Re: Hopeless
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 07:03:00 PM AEST
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| Marc: There are times in everyone's life where they feel hopeless and alone. I know that right now it feels like it will continue forever, but it won't. It will end sometime, I don't know when, but it can't last forever. Don't give in. Just keep fighting and one day, better sooner than later, it will begin to fade away. |
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Re: Hopeless
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 05:57:43 PM AEST
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And oh how i have felt this way so many times in my life, this one is filled with inspirational hope in the beginning where it says i cant give you your way...that would make you to happy to know i was so weak and hopeless.....i have been in that position where i did give that person the happiness that they wanted to see me in pain for....and i was too lost and hopeless.....this is so sad.....my heart is right there with you ....and i know exactly how you feel about life...as i to would never want to live in this life any longer than i have to as it is now to speak...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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