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I told my friends but no one understood
I took my pain out on myself
Better me than someone else
It hurt at first but then felt nice
At first it was once but now it’s twice
I said I wouldn’t do it anymore
I’ll do it again because I did it before
It’s what I do to ease my pain
If I didn’t I would go insane
They say they want to help but don’t
And when I ask for help they won’t
They always treat me like dirt
And then want to care when I get hurt
One of these days it will be more than just cuts
It will be vomit, flesh and guts
Soon enough it will be over
The way things are going, by the end of October
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my way

Contributed by runaway0516 on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 10:48:29 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I did it once and it felt good
I told my friends but no one understood
I took my pain out on myself
Better me than someone else
It hurt at first but then felt nice
At first it was once but now it’s twice
I said I wouldn’t do it anymore
I’ll do it again because I did it before
It’s what I do to ease my pain
If I didn’t I would go insane
They say they want to help but don’t
And when I ask for help they won’t
They always treat me like dirt
And then want to care when I get hurt
One of these days it will be more than just cuts
It will be vomit, flesh and guts
Soon enough it will be over
The way things are going, by the end of October

Copyright Â© runaway0516 ... [ 2004-10-26 22:48:29]
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Re: my way (User Rating: 1 )
by anonymussme on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 11:09:05 PM AEST
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i know how you feel. two weeks from today is my six months no cutting but its getting harder lately and i dont know what to do. the answer is never to end it all though, trust me, ive tried that to. if you need someone to talk to private message me. i know im a stranger but sometimes that makes it easier, and im really good at listening, and i wont judge you, and i can relate. i hope it all works out whether you talk to me or not.

Re: my way (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 11:22:47 PM AEST
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I can relate too.
Please try to stay strong
I can see that you're in so much pain.
I also see that you have talent
Try to get through the pain by using your talent
keep on writing,
Please stay with us.

Evelyn

Re: my way (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 04:16:11 AM AEST
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wow, i love this, its great!

Re: my way (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 11:44:24 PM AEST
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You need to talk to someone but you shouldn't be doing that. It'll hurt poeple
to much if you leave

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