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Array ( [sid] => 68968 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How can I help? [time] => 2004-10-26 18:50:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I sit and watch you,
Getting hurt.
You always getting hurt.
And I feel like it’s my fault.

I should have been there.
I should have help.
If I only know the truth.
Was I that blind?

How could I not see your pain?
When now I see it all the time.
How can I help you?
Help you to be free.

How can I make you feel love?
And care for?
When are you going to stop saying it’s your fault?
When you did nothing wrong.

How can I help you to stop being scared?
I try so hard to make you feel love,
And needed.
I don’t like you putting yourself down.

It makes me feel like it’s my fault.
Like I am failing my best friend.
Like I am failing my sister.
Like I am failing you.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Isabella [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

How can I help?

Contributed by Isabella on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 06:50:32 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I sit and watch you,
Getting hurt.
You always getting hurt.
And I feel like it’s my fault.

I should have been there.
I should have help.
If I only know the truth.
Was I that blind?

How could I not see your pain?
When now I see it all the time.
How can I help you?
Help you to be free.

How can I make you feel love?
And care for?
When are you going to stop saying it’s your fault?
When you did nothing wrong.

How can I help you to stop being scared?
I try so hard to make you feel love,
And needed.
I don’t like you putting yourself down.

It makes me feel like it’s my fault.
Like I am failing my best friend.
Like I am failing my sister.
Like I am failing you.

Copyright Â© Isabella ... [ 2004-10-26 18:50:32]
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Re: How can I help? (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 07:07:55 PM AEST
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I really like this poem. I can totally relate to it. In fact...I still feel this way sometimes. I love this poem. It completely portrays everything just right. Awesome Write!!!!

Re: How can I help? (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:43:19 PM AEST
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This sounds like something I would say... it's just the type of person I am... all wanting to help if I can...
Awesome poem... keep up the great writing!
~Donna~

Re: How can I help? (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:43:28 PM AEST
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This sounds like something I would say... it's just the type of person I am... all wanting to help if I can...
Awesome poem... keep up the great writing!
~Donna~

Re: How can I help? (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:02:38 AM AEST
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I like this new twist to the "hurting you" poems. It's very creative.

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