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Array ( [sid] => 6895 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => the brandywine river [time] => 2002-11-17 21:30:00 [hometext] => any suggestions? this one need's more development, but i can't decide if this should be the end or just the begining. [bodytext] => He walked head down, hands in his pockets,
Consumed by hurt and lonely despair.
Carp swam by in the brandywine river
And rippled the pitiful man he saw there.
She had just come from her husband’s grave
In dark flowered dress and velvet hat.
looking to the sky for answers,
In the grass by the brandywine river she sat.
Pain can consume, and hope can forsake,
But sometimes tears an introduction make
And love can descend on us like a falling leaf,
Hypnotizing in its dance.
Two people at the low of their life,
Two strangers staring into the abyss.
A leaf fell into the brandywine river
As they fell into a kiss.
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the brandywine river

Contributed by darkeyedman on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 09:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

He walked head down, hands in his pockets,
Consumed by hurt and lonely despair.
Carp swam by in the brandywine river
And rippled the pitiful man he saw there.
She had just come from her husband’s grave
In dark flowered dress and velvet hat.
looking to the sky for answers,
In the grass by the brandywine river she sat.
Pain can consume, and hope can forsake,
But sometimes tears an introduction make
And love can descend on us like a falling leaf,
Hypnotizing in its dance.
Two people at the low of their life,
Two strangers staring into the abyss.
A leaf fell into the brandywine river
As they fell into a kiss.

Copyright Â© darkeyedman ... [ 2002-11-17 21:30:00]
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Re: the brandywine river (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 02:59:18 AM AEST
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Oh this should definately be
just the beginning, this is beautiful
i really enjoyed this i'd like to read
more on this one, hope more of
this story is to come, Thanks for
sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: the brandywine river (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 08:19:48 AM AEST
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I agree it should just be the beginning but I don't have any suggestions for you but so far it is really good.

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