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Array ( [sid] => 68921 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Good-bye [time] => 2004-10-26 12:10:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My life is completely over
My purpose is already dead
My heartbeat will not calm for you
Your voice remains months in the past
And although you're not beside me
You have been with me this whole time
Showing me how foolish I am
That I am ugly and stupid
For I wish that you were with me
But it is imagination
I cry and hope to see your eyes
You crash my hopes and dreams downward
Your eyes tell me that I'm a fool
I don't need life anymore
I have no purpose, you were mine
I will break every mirror
My reflection is too horrid
I will find my favorite knife
I am going to run away
I will find the last of my strength
To press this blade into my flesh
And turn the color green to red
On my one and only left wrist
And render my eyesight dizzy
And from dizziness to darkness
I will never wake up, NEVER
I will find my true happiness
For if I truly do love you
I need to say to you good luck
And I need to tell you good-bye [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Nezenic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Good-bye

Contributed by Nezenic on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 12:10:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

My life is completely over
My purpose is already dead
My heartbeat will not calm for you
Your voice remains months in the past
And although you're not beside me
You have been with me this whole time
Showing me how foolish I am
That I am ugly and stupid
For I wish that you were with me
But it is imagination
I cry and hope to see your eyes
You crash my hopes and dreams downward
Your eyes tell me that I'm a fool
I don't need life anymore
I have no purpose, you were mine
I will break every mirror
My reflection is too horrid
I will find my favorite knife
I am going to run away
I will find the last of my strength
To press this blade into my flesh
And turn the color green to red
On my one and only left wrist
And render my eyesight dizzy
And from dizziness to darkness
I will never wake up, NEVER
I will find my true happiness
For if I truly do love you
I need to say to you good luck
And I need to tell you good-bye

Copyright © Nezenic ... [ 2004-10-26 12:10:56]
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Re: Good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 12:53:38 PM AEST
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better him then you..what a waste..letting another person make you feel that way. you deserve better. I've been there and I know. Look in that mirror and tell yourself you're wonderful because you're great.. if he makes you feel bad then he's and ass!!! Drop the knife, use the pen!!! WRITE HIM OFF.

Re: Good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:16:06 PM AEST
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Joe.....

Re: Good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by Crash on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 07:53:04 AM AEST
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good poem, but never give them the comfort of saying goodbye

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