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why do I do this self-harm
I begin to question why I want to die
and sometimes why I want to cry
is it because I hate myself and cannot deal
or because I cut and cannot heal
maybe its my friends
and their thinking of the end
so tired of looking in the mirror
and what I see
so tired of hating me
does this mean I am getting better
no more suicide letters
does this mean I am taking the love I recieve
does this mean I cannot leave
or things are looking up
so that I cannot cut
it feels so strange
and in my brain...so out of range
the blades taring up my skin
the comments sinking within
will this finish with a happy ending
or a wrist that needs mending
I do feel the addiction of the blade
and the pain it has made [comments] => 6 [counter] => 249 [topic] => 36 [informant] => screwup [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Addiction Of The Blade

Contributed by screwup on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 10:46:24 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

'ALONE'... I have carved in my arm
why do I do this self-harm
I begin to question why I want to die
and sometimes why I want to cry
is it because I hate myself and cannot deal
or because I cut and cannot heal
maybe its my friends
and their thinking of the end
so tired of looking in the mirror
and what I see
so tired of hating me
does this mean I am getting better
no more suicide letters
does this mean I am taking the love I recieve
does this mean I cannot leave
or things are looking up
so that I cannot cut
it feels so strange
and in my brain...so out of range
the blades taring up my skin
the comments sinking within
will this finish with a happy ending
or a wrist that needs mending
I do feel the addiction of the blade
and the pain it has made

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Re: Addiction Of The Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 11:17:38 AM AEST
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The poetry is great, the self harm is awful. I just joined another poetry group along with this one..it's in yahoo too, it's from dawn to dusk..you might like it there. PM me if you want the link..it's for people who are be-polar or have other problems like depression. I really like it.

Re: Addiction Of The Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by Nezenic on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 12:16:30 PM AEST
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Very truthful. I can relate to this poem very well. And nicely written.

Re: Addiction Of The Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:25:06 PM AEST
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Hey...
This is a good strong write... I think u are finally realizing what all this is doing to u... and those around u... that's good!!! U're sarting to question urself and look for answers... other than turning to the knife...
It can end with a happy ending... but it's all up to u... and what u want to do...
Love always...
~Donna~

Re: Addiction Of The Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 07:49:07 PM AEST
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Grat poem, hun. I really liked the content and rhymes. :-D Sorry things sound so sucky.... I don't know that there is anything I can say to help, but great poem anyways!

Re: Addiction Of The Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by GurLG0nEWr0ng on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:54:08 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. u stated your feelings well, I kinda feel tha same way. Keep ya head up tho

Re: Addiction Of The Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:24:37 AM AEST
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there's alot of quetions and truth of your life.
it's a very emotional poem.
i'm with you and your feelings

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