Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 15:52:51 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 68908 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love... [time] => 2004-10-26 10:39:12 [hometext] => I wrote this poem about two people who love each other so much but don't know if the other is willing to wait... please leave comments... it is the only way we can improve ourselves [bodytext] => He strokes her soft cheek
And whispers in her ear "i love you"
Knowing that it's true
She's all he's ever wanted
She knows that she loves him
And she tells him everyday
There's no one else for her
She would give up the world to be w/ him
Yet she can't be w/ him
The years between them are just to much
But to feel this kind of love
It's to much to keep inside
They love each other endlessly
W/ out a doubt
He tells her he'll wait
And she tries to think it's true
She's trying to make herself believe him
And not think he'll find someone else
She loves him so much
There is no one else
He knows in his heart that everything he says is true
But to know that she doubts it
Makes him want to prove it even more
He won't find another
There's no possible way
He loves her completely
There's no one else for him
He knows he'll wait for her
But will she wait for him
This she knows is true
For she never wants to be w/ out him
She would wait for him forever
Even if it meant to be w/ him for only one day
They'll love each other endlessly
So they'll wait til they can be together
And that day will be soon

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jishes_4_ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Love...

Contributed by jishes_4_ever on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 10:39:12 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

He strokes her soft cheek
And whispers in her ear "i love you"
Knowing that it's true
She's all he's ever wanted
She knows that she loves him
And she tells him everyday
There's no one else for her
She would give up the world to be w/ him
Yet she can't be w/ him
The years between them are just to much
But to feel this kind of love
It's to much to keep inside
They love each other endlessly
W/ out a doubt
He tells her he'll wait
And she tries to think it's true
She's trying to make herself believe him
And not think he'll find someone else
She loves him so much
There is no one else
He knows in his heart that everything he says is true
But to know that she doubts it
Makes him want to prove it even more
He won't find another
There's no possible way
He loves her completely
There's no one else for him
He knows he'll wait for her
But will she wait for him
This she knows is true
For she never wants to be w/ out him
She would wait for him forever
Even if it meant to be w/ him for only one day
They'll love each other endlessly
So they'll wait til they can be together
And that day will be soon

Copyright © jishes_4_ever ... [ 2004-10-26 10:39:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 11:26:45 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I really like the poem and only noticed one tiny mistake and that's the misuse of the word to in the line..
The years between them are just to much
But to feel this kind of love ; it should be too.. as in too many, or too much. Also if it were me (I know it's not.) I would not do the w/out thing, but write out without.. it just looks less hurried, and more like you really wanted to write the poem..but that's me. The idea and the poem itself were GREAT.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com