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[aid] => mick
[title] => Over You - Revised
[time] => 2004-10-26 07:46:05
[hometext] => I revised the last line a little its still not all that good but better again comments and suggestions are welcomed! I pick my pen once again
[bodytext] => I pick my pen once again Trying to push u away from my thoughts Desperately trying to think about something else Desperately trying the not to find your smiling face in the clouds Trying to forget those few incalculable moments we sat in my backyard talking Don’t u understand every moment is like an eternity when I am not with you Don’t u understand the desperation How can u not u were once there It seems like perpetuity since I have written about something but u About those warm blue eyes that glimmer when u smile That smile that can soften a heart of stone That touch that sends chills down my back Just your thought makes even my tears taste sweet You say we’ll always be friends nothing will ever change Don’t u think I’ve noticed how far away u seem when your with her Don’t u think I noticed how far-flung those times seem when we sat down and laughed You say I am crazy u say its just a crush You say I’ll be over u But my question is will I ever be over u That only time will answer until then my paper will be filled with thoughts of u... [comments] => 0 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 22 [informant] => searchingforlove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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