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They seem to spiral into space
Into nightfall, into demise...

Swathed in black silk that is endless
I cannot place this phantasm of a face
There is no room to rise, to rise...

These waves that have rendered me lifeless
Flow my dreams into the darkest embrace
I submerge deeper into lies, into lies...

Into beauteous lies. [comments] => 10 [counter] => 374 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Avarice_Riot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Weightless

Contributed by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:28:43 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

My thoughts have turned so weightless
They seem to spiral into space
Into nightfall, into demise...

Swathed in black silk that is endless
I cannot place this phantasm of a face
There is no room to rise, to rise...

These waves that have rendered me lifeless
Flow my dreams into the darkest embrace
I submerge deeper into lies, into lies...

Into beauteous lies.

Copyright © Avarice_Riot ... [ 2004-10-26 03:28:43]
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Re: Weightless (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:38:51 AM AEST
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Another masterpiece you have written here. Your poetry leaves me in awe. Awesome poem!!!

Re: Weightless (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:39:13 AM AEST
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I can really identify with this, thoughts spiralling out of control.

I read the decending into lies as kidding myself about life, but whatever the meaning
i could really personalize this to myself.

great writing.

Johnny.

Re: Weightless (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 05:24:23 AM AEST
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I found this quite interesting. A different way to contemplate the turmoil of thought. I rather like your view of the struggle within. :o} "Beauteous Lies" hmmm?!? Great and short. Nice combo. Kudos!
Thumps ; 0)

Re: Weightless (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 02:53:52 AM AEST
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i know the feeling. i can relate to this write.
its rather short and fastly to the point. but it doesnt take away from the write.
your talent shines through this beautifully.
it was a really great poem. nicely done. 5 stars.
Becky

Re: Weightless (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 01:28:06 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Weightless (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:40:52 AM AEST
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So free and pure truth in your poetry. You are a true poetic soul. Tiffany J. (Red_October)

Re: Weightless (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:52:10 PM AEST
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Gosh, its brilliantly written.
:)

Re: Weightless (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:12:58 AM AEST
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God..what an awesome conclusion..its a masterpiece...love and smiles my friend:-)
venkat

Re: Weightless (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:06:52 AM AEST
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You know what? You're not a super poet... but you're a super duper poet! Great work of poetry here.

Re: Weightless (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:45:34 AM AEST
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If you are going to succumb to lies, they might as well be poetic. I loved the three stanza final line rhyme. Wonderful!

Spike

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