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Where The Mourning Moan
Contributed by
girlg0newrong
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:35:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Fading into the shadows where the mourning moan
Becoming apart of this unseen world
Opposite of smiles, and behind the tears
Deafening, painful, mournful, sound
Make it cease at once!
I drift along with throbbing ears
Unable to think, barley able to move
I’ve never heard anything quite like this
It’s all around, when and where will the calling stop?
I open my eyes, I shut my mouth
The calling subsides
It was I
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2004-10-25 21:35:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Where The Mourning Moan
(User Rating: 1 ) by blossomingcherry5353 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:39:12 PM AEST (User
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Wow!! Great job this is denfinately will be one of my favorites............. Once again a great write keep it up. |
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Re: Where The Mourning Moan
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:57:51 PM AEST (User
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very nice. i liked this one. very ncie concept, havent seen it written about really before. |
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Re: Where The Mourning Moan
(User Rating: 1 ) by thumper on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 08:18:32 AM AEST (User
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I've felt like this many times (where's that noise coming from? Oh, it's only me silently screaming! Yikes! lol) I appreciate how you put this. Very fresh and different. I will be checking out more of your writes. Kudos!
Thumps ; 0) |
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