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[sid] => 68832
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => The Three
[time] => 2004-10-25 17:44:02
[hometext] => Ok, not my best work, but I thought I'd post it up anyway. Please, I really really want some constructive critisism!
[bodytext] => Hate is strong But not the strongest Strong enough for me Told not to hate anyone But needing the feeling Needing the strength The wrong kind of strength Terrible word, Hate How to change such a feeling... Never to change Stand strong with the power Be strong Live strong Only act strong But alone...... Lonliness is strong Stronger then Hate Too strong Overpowering Don't like it Don't want it Love......? Love is the strongest Best of all Not overpowering Seep up the feeling Keep it safe Lock it away Throw away the key Wait..... Someone found it? Really? Love...... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Quilla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
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