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Array ( [sid] => 68823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Never Let Go [time] => 2004-10-25 16:36:57 [hometext] => I wrote this last summer..... yeah... its kinda depressing im really proud of it ^_^ [bodytext] => Shipped into the waters
an ocean big and deep
left there to tauter
there the children weep
time consuming past revealing
and resuming
ocean’s stealing.....
children’s souls so fragile
left just an empty shell
no feeling or emotion
life’s a living hell
when stranded on the ocean
such a bitter thing
an ocean full of pain
so cold and unforgiving
one can never gain......
present is horrid
cause time never stands still
like a horror story
the ocean can kill
acrimonious beauty
that never lets go
tis an oceans duty
an oceans low
tears flow from there cheeks
children die
and children weep
it waves gripping your arms
yanking you out of your boat
taking you down.....
It never lets go.............

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 39 [informant] => immortal_pain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Never Let Go

Contributed by immortal_pain on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:36:57 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Shipped into the waters
an ocean big and deep
left there to tauter
there the children weep
time consuming past revealing
and resuming
ocean’s stealing.....
children’s souls so fragile
left just an empty shell
no feeling or emotion
life’s a living hell
when stranded on the ocean
such a bitter thing
an ocean full of pain
so cold and unforgiving
one can never gain......
present is horrid
cause time never stands still
like a horror story
the ocean can kill
acrimonious beauty
that never lets go
tis an oceans duty
an oceans low
tears flow from there cheeks
children die
and children weep
it waves gripping your arms
yanking you out of your boat
taking you down.....
It never lets go.............

Copyright Â© immortal_pain ... [ 2004-10-25 16:36:57]
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Re: Never Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:26:20 PM AEST
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now this my fiendish little friend is poetry. 5 stars and a shrunken head for you.

Re: Never Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:42:45 PM AEST
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amazing. much reason to be proud of this one.

Re: Never Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by immortal_pain on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 04:48:49 PM AEST
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teheh thanks so much yall ^_^

Re: Never Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:17:18 PM AEST
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I really liked the images.

Very cool.

--Mothy

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