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Array ( [sid] => 68805 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life... [time] => 2004-10-25 14:50:56 [hometext] => I had written these lines down on my mouse pad some time ago: Life... It's what u choose... To live or die... it's urs to lose... the more I thought about it... the following is the result... comments welcome... [bodytext] => Life...
It's what you choose...
To live or die...
It's your's to lose

If you choose life...
To stay alive
Keep treading the deepest part...
You can find
Keep your head above the water...
And you'll never falter

If you've got... God on your side
He will see you through
So that you will have the strength
To choose and never lose

Life...
It's what you choose...
To live or die...
It's your's to lose

I... myself... have made my choice
I have chosen... to live and to voice
My opinions and my views...
Loud and clear...
For all to choose

To cheer on those who are lost
And spur them on
Before... it costs
Them dearly... in the end
When they're too blinded to see
A life with no friends can be better
Than a life that's gone forever
Because someone didn't take the time
To listen and be a friend

Life...
It's what you choose...
To live or die...
It's your's to lose

If you choose to die...
Then you lose... big time
There's so much life ahead of you
Oh... won't you stay and see it through?
See what God has planned for you?

The mystery of things to come...
Is enough to make it all worth while
Oh... can't you see... there's no doing life over
No second chance... when it's gone
It's gone forever

Life...
It's what you choose... it to be
To live or die...
It's your's to lose
Oh... please... won't you choose...

Well... if others... don't like my way
That's just tough and let's just say...
They have their own... lives to lead
And when they hear someone plead...
Oh... please help me?

And they turn their backs...
On that poor soul...
Have no pity... no remorse
When comes judgement day...
They're gonna have to explain...
Why they did... what they did
And suffer the consequences of their actions

Life...
It's what you choose... it to be
To live or die...
It's your's to lose
Oh... please... won't you choose...

Life...
To live it more abundantly
And free
Life...
Is what you make it
Make it a good one...
For you... for me


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Life...

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:50:56 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



Life...
It's what you choose...
To live or die...
It's your's to lose

If you choose life...
To stay alive
Keep treading the deepest part...
You can find
Keep your head above the water...
And you'll never falter

If you've got... God on your side
He will see you through
So that you will have the strength
To choose and never lose

Life...
It's what you choose...
To live or die...
It's your's to lose

I... myself... have made my choice
I have chosen... to live and to voice
My opinions and my views...
Loud and clear...
For all to choose

To cheer on those who are lost
And spur them on
Before... it costs
Them dearly... in the end
When they're too blinded to see
A life with no friends can be better
Than a life that's gone forever
Because someone didn't take the time
To listen and be a friend

Life...
It's what you choose...
To live or die...
It's your's to lose

If you choose to die...
Then you lose... big time
There's so much life ahead of you
Oh... won't you stay and see it through?
See what God has planned for you?

The mystery of things to come...
Is enough to make it all worth while
Oh... can't you see... there's no doing life over
No second chance... when it's gone
It's gone forever

Life...
It's what you choose... it to be
To live or die...
It's your's to lose
Oh... please... won't you choose...

Well... if others... don't like my way
That's just tough and let's just say...
They have their own... lives to lead
And when they hear someone plead...
Oh... please help me?

And they turn their backs...
On that poor soul...
Have no pity... no remorse
When comes judgement day...
They're gonna have to explain...
Why they did... what they did
And suffer the consequences of their actions

Life...
It's what you choose... it to be
To live or die...
It's your's to lose
Oh... please... won't you choose...

Life...
To live it more abundantly
And free
Life...
Is what you make it
Make it a good one...
For you... for me






Copyright © kidpoet_213 ... [ 2004-10-25 14:50:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Life... (User Rating: 1 )
by Saz on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 03:08:05 PM AEST
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Lol, for a minute there, I thought you'd written the whole thing on your mouse pad!!! Sounds very much like a song... do you sing?


Re: Life... (User Rating: 1 )
by alliecat on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 03:55:03 PM AEST
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i love your poem.....theres sooo much truth in what you say


Re: Life... (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 06:39:08 PM AEST
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verry verrry good.


Re: Life... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:10:57 PM AEST
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excellent write. very well presented.




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