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Array ( [sid] => 6879 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2002-11-17 17:00:00 [hometext] => This particular poem is about my first boyfriend as a freshman in high school. For some reason this is an incredibaly easy topic to write about. We are no longer together, but we still care for each other as friends. [bodytext] => Tonight I looked up in the sky at the stars, though I
told myself I never would. You see for on each star
lies a memory with you, all too clear and all too good. When I used to look into your eyes,and you
looked into mine, I knew that if I looked up at the sky, I'd see those stars brightly shine. Your smile could light up a room, and make everyone stop and turn, and though you didn't know it, you were making my heart ache and burn. Everynight I thought to myself, "this is too good to be true" and one day it would end, and I'd have to forget about you. That day has arrived like I knew it would, yes, I am sad but I also have a feeling that's good. I am a stronger person because of this, but there are things both funny and sweet that i will and do miss. Thank you for helping me experiance what GOOD comes from love for a while, because tonight i got the courage to look up at the sky and smile. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 2 [informant] => VWgurl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Untitled

Contributed by VWgurl on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Tonight I looked up in the sky at the stars, though I
told myself I never would. You see for on each star
lies a memory with you, all too clear and all too good. When I used to look into your eyes,and you
looked into mine, I knew that if I looked up at the sky, I'd see those stars brightly shine. Your smile could light up a room, and make everyone stop and turn, and though you didn't know it, you were making my heart ache and burn. Everynight I thought to myself, "this is too good to be true" and one day it would end, and I'd have to forget about you. That day has arrived like I knew it would, yes, I am sad but I also have a feeling that's good. I am a stronger person because of this, but there are things both funny and sweet that i will and do miss. Thank you for helping me experiance what GOOD comes from love for a while, because tonight i got the courage to look up at the sky and smile.




Copyright © VWgurl ... [ 2002-11-17 17:00:00]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 09:35:03 AM AEST
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it is great to be able to look back on love with memories and a smile...great write
peace love and happy poetry


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:23:38 PM AEST
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Lost love and friendship is always hard to write about. Other than one of my own poems yours is the most positive I have seen yet. Thank you for that.




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