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Array ( [sid] => 68784 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => why [time] => 2004-10-25 10:19:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Don't come here,
Don't leave here,
These are the crossroads of our life,

Can't dream here,
Can't Stay here,
It's already a false reality,

Won't keep here,
Won't cry here,
Music is the love I'm finding,

Shouldn't need here,
Shouldn't forget here,
I'll remember all the meetings of fate,

Why did I have to meet you here? It's the
Right people at the wrong place and you're
six hours away from the rest of my life.

It's the power of the silence,
It's the beauty of the details, that
This place lets us appreciate,

It's the meaning of the music,
The phrasing of the future,
These tones they are so sweet,

Forget our past,
These weeks are the present,
We are who we make,

Not learning from the knowledge,
But enlightened by the people,
These meetings are what makes us change,

Why did I have to meet you here? It's the
Right people at the wrong place and you're
six hours away from the rest of my life.

I don't cry for strangers,
I cry for our potential,
And sing for our goodbye,

We can dream a hope,
but timeless fades,
the distance is a clock that's ticking,

So its a start,
Blind is the finish,
Foolish for outta control,

It was the meeting,
Nothing is ending,
Saying goodbye to strangers never hurt so much,

Fate can't you see,
I'm angry at you,
Why did you, why, why?

Life can't you see what
You're putting me through,
Brought us here why? why?

Angry at circumstances
Can't help but fall,
That's why they call it falling in love

It's the right people at the wrong place and you're
Six hours away from the rest of my life. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 43 [informant] => bonewiz326 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
why

Contributed by bonewiz326 on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:19:57 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Don't come here,
Don't leave here,
These are the crossroads of our life,

Can't dream here,
Can't Stay here,
It's already a false reality,

Won't keep here,
Won't cry here,
Music is the love I'm finding,

Shouldn't need here,
Shouldn't forget here,
I'll remember all the meetings of fate,

Why did I have to meet you here? It's the
Right people at the wrong place and you're
six hours away from the rest of my life.

It's the power of the silence,
It's the beauty of the details, that
This place lets us appreciate,

It's the meaning of the music,
The phrasing of the future,
These tones they are so sweet,

Forget our past,
These weeks are the present,
We are who we make,

Not learning from the knowledge,
But enlightened by the people,
These meetings are what makes us change,

Why did I have to meet you here? It's the
Right people at the wrong place and you're
six hours away from the rest of my life.

I don't cry for strangers,
I cry for our potential,
And sing for our goodbye,

We can dream a hope,
but timeless fades,
the distance is a clock that's ticking,

So its a start,
Blind is the finish,
Foolish for outta control,

It was the meeting,
Nothing is ending,
Saying goodbye to strangers never hurt so much,

Fate can't you see,
I'm angry at you,
Why did you, why, why?

Life can't you see what
You're putting me through,
Brought us here why? why?

Angry at circumstances
Can't help but fall,
That's why they call it falling in love

It's the right people at the wrong place and you're
Six hours away from the rest of my life.




Copyright © bonewiz326 ... [ 2004-10-25 10:19:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: why (User Rating: 1 )
by Saz on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:52:08 PM AEST
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Confusing, but still a great read. Flows nicely, well done!


Re: why (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th January 2008 @ 08:25:02 AM AEST
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This is a really deep poem. It made me think when I read it. Great Job!!




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