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[title] => Give It All Up
[time] => 2004-10-24 20:46:31
[hometext] => Critique and comments deeply appreciated.
[bodytext] => For the first time today, I wanted to give up Honestly Just give it all away Throw away my dreams And I didn't regret one thought I wanted to run away from this confusion Take back all the tears I wanted to give up everything I've never felt this way before I shivered in my cold, Not knowing what to do I was just so sick of losing everything Being beaten everyday I feel so hopeless So abandoned Nothing seems the same I'm not as strong as I used to be Have you ever wanted to just give up? I'm dying to know if I'm alone Because I've never felt this way before It's never even crossed my mind Can I throw away all my dreams And move on to something real? These fleeting thoughts all crossed my mind But I told no one, I kept it to myself I know I cannot do that I know I'll only let you down So I'll be back in there tomorrow Sweating through the pain Thinking these same thoughts But still chasing my unreachable dream [comments] => 2 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 65 [informant] => iluvpencils [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
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