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I want to scream, I want to bash my head against this wall until I feel nothing more of this. I want to sleep, I want to sleep until I can awake to something new.
God, I don't want to die, I just want to sleep.
God, I don't want to die, I just want to scream.
I want the door to stay shut and I never want to know what's on the other side.
I'm going to sit here and cry until I cry tears of blood, I want to cry until someone realises that I'm hurting. I want to hurt until all of this blood turns to ice and the ice melts away and I am me no more. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 13 [informant] => surge_joebot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Bleed without reason

Contributed by surge_joebot on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:55:06 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Descending into depression - losing focus on those around me.
I want to scream, I want to bash my head against this wall until I feel nothing more of this. I want to sleep, I want to sleep until I can awake to something new.
God, I don't want to die, I just want to sleep.
God, I don't want to die, I just want to scream.
I want the door to stay shut and I never want to know what's on the other side.
I'm going to sit here and cry until I cry tears of blood, I want to cry until someone realises that I'm hurting. I want to hurt until all of this blood turns to ice and the ice melts away and I am me no more.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-10-24 18:55:06]
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Re: Bleed without reason (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:36:11 PM AEST
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excellent write.

Re: Bleed without reason (User Rating: 1 )
by iluvpencils on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:54:23 PM AEST
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I loved this. You might want to reconsider the phrasing but I still loved it.

I could completely grasp and understand you emotions. I've felt that way so many times before...where you don't want to die but just want everything to go away and stop feeling. I felt that way today actually lol. Thank you for putting it into words.

Best wishes,
.devin.

Re: Bleed without reason (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:56:03 PM AEST
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wow amazin poem very deep and emotional i loved it

Re: Bleed without reason (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 05:00:54 AM AEST
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this is awesome, i love it!

Re: Bleed without reason (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:08:20 AM AEST
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so sad..good..

blessed be
sirena

Re: Bleed without reason (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:27:08 AM AEST
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damn... I feel it too... p/m sometime

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