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Thoughts a blur…
Words of beauty,
A tantalizing caress.
Brush of lips,
Eternal kiss…
An ocean of you,
A universe filled with your love…
Warm in a loving embrace,
Passions rise again,
Relentless, overwhelming…
Yearning for something that I can never have…
Darkness descends,
The blinding sun has been destroyed,
Enveloped in the blanket of Night…
Sweet whispers; “I love you…”
Gaze into the yes,
Infinite, profound, ever so beautiful…
Windows of the soul,
Take a glimpse inside…
Accommodate my kiss,
Be mine forever…
Dance in the rhythms of a dream,
Sing a hymn of unbridled desires…
Room lit only by a decaying candle,
Shadows waltzing upon the walls of Lust…
Perpetually confined,
You’re so near, yet so far…
Across a lonely sea,
Beyond the desolate shores,
I sing the song we know so well…
Hoping the winds will carry it to you…
Waiting for your return,
Expecting a reply,
But the winds only whisper words of emptiness…
Never will you return,
You have found another,
More beautiful, more luminous than I…
Slowly dying inside,
Screams are never heard…
Tears never tended to…
All is silent,
All is dead…
And I am left in the boundless seas of Sorrow forevermore…

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“Discontented Passions…”

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:42:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Pulse quickens,
Thoughts a blur…
Words of beauty,
A tantalizing caress.
Brush of lips,
Eternal kiss…
An ocean of you,
A universe filled with your love…
Warm in a loving embrace,
Passions rise again,
Relentless, overwhelming…
Yearning for something that I can never have…
Darkness descends,
The blinding sun has been destroyed,
Enveloped in the blanket of Night…
Sweet whispers; “I love you…”
Gaze into the yes,
Infinite, profound, ever so beautiful…
Windows of the soul,
Take a glimpse inside…
Accommodate my kiss,
Be mine forever…
Dance in the rhythms of a dream,
Sing a hymn of unbridled desires…
Room lit only by a decaying candle,
Shadows waltzing upon the walls of Lust…
Perpetually confined,
You’re so near, yet so far…
Across a lonely sea,
Beyond the desolate shores,
I sing the song we know so well…
Hoping the winds will carry it to you…
Waiting for your return,
Expecting a reply,
But the winds only whisper words of emptiness…
Never will you return,
You have found another,
More beautiful, more luminous than I…
Slowly dying inside,
Screams are never heard…
Tears never tended to…
All is silent,
All is dead…
And I am left in the boundless seas of Sorrow forevermore…

Copyright Â© FleurdeSang ... [ 2004-10-24 18:42:42]
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Re: “Discontented Passions…” (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:00:46 PM AEST
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It is just possible he knew he was not good enough for you! Ever think of that?

: )

Re: “Discontented Passions…” (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:58:29 PM AEST
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sounds like you met a man..but then I hate them all. Sorry..hope your heart heals. I have only known one good one ..he lays dying in a coma in Italy. I'm sure I am wrong about men..I'm wrong about almost everything..and so I keep looking, but I am always disappointed. :-*) the pain does nothing to dull the poetic beauty.

Re: “Discontented Passions…” (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 11:32:54 AM AEST
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Love is never outside ourselves it is within us I am passionate abt these words.

Rita said it so well.
Maybe he knew he was not good enough for you!
Be kind to yourself it is what you need.

Take comfort in what you want in order to express yourself at your highest potential.

We all have so many self concepts. Why did he leave me?
Why do I look fat?
Why is my life to much?
He was not worthy of your love that's my philosophy.

Take care of you always
Masterpiece once again

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: “Discontented Passions…” (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 05:06:54 PM AEST
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And yet perhaps ... ( ever the optomist ) he was called away and struggles to break the chains, the yolk that he has been burdened with, to fight free and return to your side. Pehaps his longings for and of you, are all that keep him trudging through the wasted existence that is his current daily routine. Have you seen him with another, has he written of another, could his current task master be feminine ? Perhaps he too sails the seas of Sorrow and you shall find him there ....

Great write Steph ~

Nazmythian ~

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