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[aid] => mick
[title] => lake of tears
[time] => 2004-10-24 15:56:25
[hometext] => please comment. I hope you like and also please read all of my other poems
[bodytext] => I sit next to the lake And wonder why it was called the Lake of Tears I look in the water And saw sadness in the water Faces and voices starts appear in my head I hear a sound ahead and I look up I see a boy filled of pain and goes in the water Never coming out, I search down in the water to find him A see light in the water and I swim to it Suddenly I get out the water And saw a world no one haw ever seen And there stands the boy waiting He stares at me then runs I follow him, but I always lost him But still I was able to find him He leads me through places I never seen Finally he stops at a lake and cries There in the lake lies his hopes and dreams he could never complete He looks at me and gets up He grabs my arm and pulls me close Then he jumps in the water pulling me in with him Then I realized I was back where I was Sitting next to the lake But now it was different Now I know why it was called the Lake of Tears [comments] => 1 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 32 [informant] => the_fallen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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