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[aid] => mick
[title] => More Pressure From Here
[time] => 2004-10-24 13:21:27
[hometext] => I'm deployed going through withdrawal from my girl and thoughts I shouldn't be thinkin.
[bodytext] => I'm not sure how to write this poem But I wrote it twice... My womans is MY misses The only reason I expect sweet kisses Like my number one investment I keep her in the mint Just cause to me she's a tenth I never drop dimes She could hate me tomorrow Long as she love me today We go through My job don't help Just cause the money don't grow She say it's okay Just don't understand For me If I'm not making her happy I'm not a goodman That don't change a thang See I deploy and ploy That aint right On my missions Dont' have time to make love all-night I fiigure we just share time for company My heart be second guessin Can't blame me because we have our faults Won't go into the basics It's just like she say I say The words don't seperate but still we apart My heart can't take this I wonder how she doing or where she been Even if somewhere she found another man Guess I've come down with a case Been this way for weaks My mind keep making my heart weak Only because I thought I was strong Picture me and her all night long Some may criticize me for thinking But that's my heart and my intention is to never part Rather I be or we be I guess it's a catch 22 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Marcus493 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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