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When will it all go!!
People shiver as they pass by
The wind gives a howling cry

The ice is thick on the ground
And winter snow is all around
The snowflakes are shpaed in every style
I bet the snow will last a while

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*Snow*

Contributed by footiebabe on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:06:19 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

The cold glistening snow
When will it all go!!
People shiver as they pass by
The wind gives a howling cry

The ice is thick on the ground
And winter snow is all around
The snowflakes are shpaed in every style
I bet the snow will last a while

Copyright © footiebabe ... [ 2004-10-24 07:06:19]
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Re: *Snow* (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:07:51 AM AEST
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Aww this is cute, just think of all the snow men you can build... And hitting your friends with snow balls.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: *Snow* (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:10:24 AM AEST
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Hi Michelle

This is a very ggod poem, lots of descriptive words.

Mum is very proud **big smiles**

Love Dawny (aka Mum)

Re: *Snow* (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:03:28 AM AEST
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Cold snow, like my heart, your poem was exceptional, beautiful visual images surronded by a the feeling you put into the poem cool write.

Re: *Snow* (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:56:35 AM AEST
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Hi Michelle!
Cool poem, very descriptive. Welcome to YPDC, keep writing, you are very good for a 9 year old.

Love Ali xx

Re: *Snow* (User Rating: 1 )
by emocutie07 on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:37:01 AM AEST
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ahdorable write!!

Re: *Snow* (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:35:23 PM AEST
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I always hated when people said things about how young I was and compared my abilities to my age, but...

I've never seen a nine-year-old who wrote such observant things.

I really like this, keep up the good work!

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: *Snow* (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:42:26 PM AEST
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somehow me thinks you could have written this on the hottest summer's day and i would still have felt the anticipation of snowflakes on my tongue... hugs n' love nessa

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