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Array ( [sid] => 68602 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => silent cry [time] => 2004-10-23 20:05:08 [hometext] => walk me to my loon [bodytext] => walking alone at night....
sometimes life seems so hard...
i have no one to show me the way nor hold my hand
its like learning how to walk
music playing in my head...
i feel stares as i walk...
so tiny to society...
yet so big to those who i hate
so much anger
cant believe im still breathing...
sometimes i feel depressed.
sometimes i feel like crying
sometimes i feel like ending it...
end all the drama
end all the mess in my life
crying to my loon
giving up on everything
let every one tell their own side OF MY LIFE
let em poke me n push me around like the kid i used to be
im a societys tool....
just a face in the crowd...
do die tomorrow?
why not today. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 61 [informant] => oneteartofellpain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

silent cry

Contributed by oneteartofellpain on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:05:08 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

walking alone at night....
sometimes life seems so hard...
i have no one to show me the way nor hold my hand
its like learning how to walk
music playing in my head...
i feel stares as i walk...
so tiny to society...
yet so big to those who i hate
so much anger
cant believe im still breathing...
sometimes i feel depressed.
sometimes i feel like crying
sometimes i feel like ending it...
end all the drama
end all the mess in my life
crying to my loon
giving up on everything
let every one tell their own side OF MY LIFE
let em poke me n push me around like the kid i used to be
im a societys tool....
just a face in the crowd...
do die tomorrow?
why not today.

Copyright © oneteartofellpain ... [ 2004-10-23 20:05:08]
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Re: silent cry (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:26:43 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
Hang tuff, friend, joy cometh in the morning.
luv, huggs, hope,
emy

Re: silent cry (User Rating: 1 )
by greeneyes on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:33:57 PM AEST
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Such an honest write of real feelings. I hope they are words. Life has its ups and downs. You have so much to give in life. Hang in there, friends do help.

Nancy

Re: silent cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:01:25 PM AEST
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wondeful write

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