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Array ( [sid] => 68558 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Safety Pin Scares [time] => 2004-10-23 12:27:12 [hometext] => I wrote this one umm not too long ago... just before my best friend got locked in the mental institution.. she taught me how to use saftey pins ^_^ [bodytext] => I stare blankly at safety pins
wondering how much damage they can cause
safety pin scares
safety pin scares
I wonder
and ponder
on thought of death
how quickly can safety pins walk my steps?
I look into there soul
there un spoken words
and wonder how much
how much it would hurt
I stare blankly at safety pins
wondering how long it would take for the damage to take effect?
And if it would really
Bring about my death
I stare blankly at safety pins
wondering how much damage they can cause
safety pin scares
safety pin scares

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Safety Pin Scares

Contributed by immortal_pain on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 12:27:12 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I stare blankly at safety pins
wondering how much damage they can cause
safety pin scares
safety pin scares
I wonder
and ponder
on thought of death
how quickly can safety pins walk my steps?
I look into there soul
there un spoken words
and wonder how much
how much it would hurt
I stare blankly at safety pins
wondering how long it would take for the damage to take effect?
And if it would really
Bring about my death
I stare blankly at safety pins
wondering how much damage they can cause
safety pin scares
safety pin scares

Copyright © immortal_pain ... [ 2004-10-23 12:27:12]
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Re: Safety Pin Scares (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:22:52 PM AEST
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hmm...Locked in the mental institution? that kinda suckz...anyway...good write. I know someone who cuts w/ safety pins much to my dismay.

Re: Safety Pin Scares (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 02:17:36 PM AEST
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when i was in the seventh grade (two years ago) my best friend showed me her scars i cried but i didnt turn her in i tried to help her through her problems and in doing so i brought my self down before long i was cuting i dont regret what i did i just wish i hadnt brought down my other friend when they found out every once and a while i do it agin or get reminded of it and i just cry for hours becsue that was the hardest time of my life(so far any way) i never used saftey pins but just about anything else you can amaine and its all the same it just stares at you till you give in to the pain i know excatly how you feel and its scary becsue i felt this way with your other poem too but somehow it seems you still caught by it and somehow i got out if you ever need someone to talk to i'm here
Allways Sincere
Leana

Re: Safety Pin Scares (User Rating: 1 )
by immortal_pain on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 10:29:03 PM AEST
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*hugs* im sorry you had such a hard time. I would love to talk with you some times ^_^ Ill send you a PM

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