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she said she doesnt break promises
i,v been waiting for 3 weeks and 2 days now
but she hasnt called
i would wait for the rest of my days just to hold her here 2nite

shesaid we will be togethr for eternity
she told me that she loved me
its been 3 weeks and 3 days
but i still havnt seen her beautiful face

why did she promise that she would come back
come back and take me with her
its been 2 mnths and 12 days
and i guess she isnt coming back again

life without her isnt much at all
life without her isnt worth living
so i guess this is goodbye
as the tears fill my weary eyes
i love u forever but this it ends tonight

i left you a note cos maybe you did come back
i left u a note to let you knwo how much i cared
you will for ever stain my heart
i will forever dream of you
life isnt anything at all
if i,m not living it with youx [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 48 [informant] => grip-wth-broken-fingers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

isnt much

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:49:57 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

she said shed be back she promised
she said she doesnt break promises
i,v been waiting for 3 weeks and 2 days now
but she hasnt called
i would wait for the rest of my days just to hold her here 2nite

shesaid we will be togethr for eternity
she told me that she loved me
its been 3 weeks and 3 days
but i still havnt seen her beautiful face

why did she promise that she would come back
come back and take me with her
its been 2 mnths and 12 days
and i guess she isnt coming back again

life without her isnt much at all
life without her isnt worth living
so i guess this is goodbye
as the tears fill my weary eyes
i love u forever but this it ends tonight

i left you a note cos maybe you did come back
i left u a note to let you knwo how much i cared
you will for ever stain my heart
i will forever dream of you
life isnt anything at all
if i,m not living it with youx

Copyright © grip-wth-broken-fingers ... [ 2004-10-23 11:49:57]
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Re: isnt much (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:54:10 AM AEST
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awwww could feel your pain in your write, i hope that one day your love wil come back to you *hugs*

pixie xx

try to be strong,I know it's hard...

Re: isnt much (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:51:27 PM AEST
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i love it

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