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Not like a child playing with glitter

Love is not sweet
When you buckle in defeat

Love is sad
With love there is no reason to be glad

Love causes pain
Like standing naked in acid rain

Love tends to burn
When that love is not returned

Love hurts
Like getting pelted in the face with dirt

Love is terrible
It is so completely unbearable

Love sucks
But who gives a ....................
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Love

Contributed by OnlyInDeathITrulyLive on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:10:37 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Love is bitter
Not like a child playing with glitter

Love is not sweet
When you buckle in defeat

Love is sad
With love there is no reason to be glad

Love causes pain
Like standing naked in acid rain

Love tends to burn
When that love is not returned

Love hurts
Like getting pelted in the face with dirt

Love is terrible
It is so completely unbearable

Love sucks
But who gives a ....................

Copyright © OnlyInDeathITrulyLive ... [ 2004-10-23 11:10:37]
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Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:20:34 AM AEST
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I couldn't agree with that poem more *HUG*

Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 11:33:55 AM AEST
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love is so very powerful, can be painful but also can be very rewarding,

*hugs*
takecare

pixie xx

a very good write btw

Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by BuTTerFly_LoVe on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:32:13 AM AEST
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I really hope you don't really feel that way.. Love can be an amazing experince with the right person you express it with.. But when you deal with the wrong person and you give them you're all and at the end you wound up with a crushed heart.. That's when you're poem hits in and then you can say love sukz.. But i know one day you will look back on you're write and laugh for min or so, because you will realize it's not true.. I hope one day you will find that true love and you will see what i am talking about.. You have a lot of tension with love.

PS. This is a great write tho love how you rhyme I LOVE THAT keep writing looking foward for more of you're writes they are interseting

HeNo UnKNOWn BuTtErfLY

Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingkk05 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:46:56 PM AEST
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Love is only what you let it be

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