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Array ( [sid] => 68537 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heirarchy [time] => 2004-10-23 09:31:54 [hometext] => Pick at the black and the white of the older world. Love that soft cloth on your soft back. [bodytext] => How does it feel to be a drone's personal drone, running errands in the cold without a shirt on, ribs ripping roughly at your sides, You did know some slaves were better. It is called heirarchy, caste system, and they say it's just Divine, and well, there is no such thing as free argument, unless you want your backside the color of the sunset, the same one that closes our routine each day. So, what goes on at night? Do you sleep? I think you enjoy the bits of hot hay digging into your scrapes, just so you can sit up in the morning; they keep you knowing pain, pain keeps you knowing relief. Well, relief makes slaves weaker. Relief makes slaves worse slaves, so the slave who eats your meat, well honor him because he knows pain. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Suz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems ) Heirarchy Contributed by Suz on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:31:54 AM in AEST Topic: Lifepoems How does it feel to be a drone's personal drone, running errands in the cold without a shirt on, ribs ripping roughly at your sides, You did know some slaves were better. It is called heirarchy, caste system, and they say it's just Divine, and well, there is no such thing as free argument, unless you want your backside the color of the sunset, the same one that closes our routine each day. So, what goes on at night? Do you sleep? I think you enjoy the bits of hot hay digging into your scrapes, just so you can sit up in the morning; they keep you knowing pain, pain keeps you knowing relief. Well, relief makes slaves weaker. Relief makes slaves worse slaves, so the slave who eats your meat, well honor him because he knows pain. Copyright © Suz ... [ 2004-10-23 09:31:54] (Date/Time posted on site) Advertisments: Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc. Re: Heirarchy (User Rating: 1 ) by ArdRi79 on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:42:07 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) I really like this poem the outrage seeps though the great imagery you used AND I felt smart reading it :) nice work Re: Heirarchy (User Rating: 1 ) by Kione on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 05:32:16 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Pretty Nice. Doesn't really describe a Heirchy though. It does describe slavery though.

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