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Array ( [sid] => 68524 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Did It Rain Today? [time] => 2004-10-23 01:11:12 [hometext] => This is a poem i just wrote about some one special to me who sadly is not real i hope you read enjoy and comment it is pretty long sorry [bodytext] => Did it rain today?

Walking out of my room in the morn

I asked

The grass is wet and the clouds are high

But I

Did not hear a drop falling on my tin roof

These rainy days are so very sad

Some people enjoy them

But not I

The flowers that bloom in full morn

Have yet to fully blossom

This is very odd

Even the sun has hidden away

I walk under trees with leaves that hang

Heavy with the dew from drops of rain

Blue birds kiss and drink of this

I am suspicious of this

Maybe there to distract me

Something is very wrong

I open the back door and enter into the family room

But before I take off my saddles as I always do

I walk by the large sofa with my mother still passed out on it

I am ever so quiet as not to wake her

I head into the hallways and go into the bath room

I wash my face and teeth and the shower

Just like I always do

When I finish I dry my self and get dressed

My shorts shirt and shoes and watch

Just as I always do

The time on my watch is wrong I think maybe just the battery

So I open the door to your room

To kiss you farewell for the day

You are there sleeping heavily

So I will be a pain and wake you with a kiss

I get on the bed next to you and put my arms around

I kiss you on your forehead

And you awaken with a smile

We talk there for a while

I think I have plenty of time

We talk and talk and talk

Just like I love to with you

I tell you I love you and that

I am glad that you are my sis

But then I realize what is wrong

And I don’t want to pay it any attention

But there looking at you and how perfect you are

Almost a perfect reflection of my opposite self

After all we are twins even though not identical we

Still look much alike

And then I hear mother calling

And I cry as you fade away

This is what I was afraid of

You are not real

I open my eyes they are streaming with tears

I heavy knock comes at my door

It’s my mother

I quickly dry my eyes and kiss her as I do

She goes off to work

And I start to cry again

Why do my dreams do this to me?

I don’t know if they do me more good than bad

But then I remember how beautiful you were

I walk out side and it’s all wet

Drops of rain begin to pour

A rush inside the family room

And leave my shoes at the door

I am by my self here now

And so I walk to the hallway then to the bathroom

I do all the things I have to

And walk out to the room

Hoping that you are there

Sleeping but you’re not

All I have is my memory

Of this dream that I had

To get me through the day

It helps but is not suffice

I go off to work and come home

I go off into my room and fall asleep

Hoping to dream of you

When I need someone in my life

And nor lover nor friends can suffice

All I really need is you

Someone who is so much like me

But better in every way

Every time I dream of you

I never want you to fade away

But you do sadly

As all perfect things must do

You are to seraphic to beautiful

Not really meant for this world

That’s why I could not have you

In my life everyday
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Did It Rain Today?

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:11:12 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Did it rain today?

Walking out of my room in the morn

I asked

The grass is wet and the clouds are high

But I

Did not hear a drop falling on my tin roof

These rainy days are so very sad

Some people enjoy them

But not I

The flowers that bloom in full morn

Have yet to fully blossom

This is very odd

Even the sun has hidden away

I walk under trees with leaves that hang

Heavy with the dew from drops of rain

Blue birds kiss and drink of this

I am suspicious of this

Maybe there to distract me

Something is very wrong

I open the back door and enter into the family room

But before I take off my saddles as I always do

I walk by the large sofa with my mother still passed out on it

I am ever so quiet as not to wake her

I head into the hallways and go into the bath room

I wash my face and teeth and the shower

Just like I always do

When I finish I dry my self and get dressed

My shorts shirt and shoes and watch

Just as I always do

The time on my watch is wrong I think maybe just the battery

So I open the door to your room

To kiss you farewell for the day

You are there sleeping heavily

So I will be a pain and wake you with a kiss

I get on the bed next to you and put my arms around

I kiss you on your forehead

And you awaken with a smile

We talk there for a while

I think I have plenty of time

We talk and talk and talk

Just like I love to with you

I tell you I love you and that

I am glad that you are my sis

But then I realize what is wrong

And I don’t want to pay it any attention

But there looking at you and how perfect you are

Almost a perfect reflection of my opposite self

After all we are twins even though not identical we

Still look much alike

And then I hear mother calling

And I cry as you fade away

This is what I was afraid of

You are not real

I open my eyes they are streaming with tears

I heavy knock comes at my door

It’s my mother

I quickly dry my eyes and kiss her as I do

She goes off to work

And I start to cry again

Why do my dreams do this to me?

I don’t know if they do me more good than bad

But then I remember how beautiful you were

I walk out side and it’s all wet

Drops of rain begin to pour

A rush inside the family room

And leave my shoes at the door

I am by my self here now

And so I walk to the hallway then to the bathroom

I do all the things I have to

And walk out to the room

Hoping that you are there

Sleeping but you’re not

All I have is my memory

Of this dream that I had

To get me through the day

It helps but is not suffice

I go off to work and come home

I go off into my room and fall asleep

Hoping to dream of you

When I need someone in my life

And nor lover nor friends can suffice

All I really need is you

Someone who is so much like me

But better in every way

Every time I dream of you

I never want you to fade away

But you do sadly

As all perfect things must do

You are to seraphic to beautiful

Not really meant for this world

That’s why I could not have you

In my life everyday




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Re: Did It Rain Today? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:06:44 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, and so emotionally sad, powerful images flowed forth from the entire poem, leaving me astounded, and tears streaming, cool and vivid, of sadness complete.


Re: Did It Rain Today? (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:07:58 AM AEST
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beautiful


Re: Did It Rain Today? (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:45:47 PM AEST
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This is one good narrative, captivated me from the first line till the last.




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