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Array ( [sid] => 68523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lust [time] => 2004-10-22 23:51:05 [hometext] => comment are welcome [bodytext] => All the love and the trust
Wasted on nothing
No more than a tool
Always the fool
you revealed the lies
You told your secrets
Always with her
hurts so bad
lets just make it fast
so many ways to get rid of the frays
all i need is a blade
it will do the rest
i guess i didn't pass the test
just look at the flood
it seems to be my blood
i of all people
would never do such a sin
but you changed me
they say theres light
they say its always bright
not where i'm going
not of what i can see
its dark and cold
oh the cruelness of it all
i hate this thing they call
lust [comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Fluffhead [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Lust

Contributed by Fluffhead on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:51:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

All the love and the trust
Wasted on nothing
No more than a tool
Always the fool
you revealed the lies
You told your secrets
Always with her
hurts so bad
lets just make it fast
so many ways to get rid of the frays
all i need is a blade
it will do the rest
i guess i didn't pass the test
just look at the flood
it seems to be my blood
i of all people
would never do such a sin
but you changed me
they say theres light
they say its always bright
not where i'm going
not of what i can see
its dark and cold
oh the cruelness of it all
i hate this thing they call
lust

Copyright © Fluffhead ... [ 2004-10-22 23:51:05]
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Re: Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 12:00:52 AM AEST
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This is very powerful. They do say there is a light, and they would be right. Take care : )

Re: Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 12:33:48 AM AEST
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good write
cheers!~

Re: Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by bobose on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:05:33 AM AEST
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nice rite it rhymed well
u should listen to happy music cause ur really deperessed
u of all people did do the sin so u have to live wth it
sorry but nice rite

Re: Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:56:59 AM AEST
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Awesome write, tragic emotions of hurt and agonies galore, written with strength baring all.

Re: Lust (User Rating: 1 )
by Crash on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:04:54 AM AEST
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This is a damn well written, well expressed, poem. I can feel you on this

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