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Array ( [sid] => 68467 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I can only hope [time] => 2004-10-22 15:24:16 [hometext] => Tell me what you think about this. Do you really think that someone would elad you on and make you believe they really liked you for 3 months? Or do you think that perhaps he really did care for me and is now scared of what may happen between the 2 of us? [bodytext] => I can only hope
That she won't fall for his convincing lines
I can only hope
That she will see through that
I was once lured intoo the lines he fed me
I began to think that he actually cared about me
That maybe,
He really liked me
I felt like I could tell him everything in the world
I felt safe in his arms
I cried many a time on his big shoulders,
Looked deeply into his beautiful blue eyes,
I even felt that we might last forever.
I know
That I really cared about him,
I worried about him
I cried over him
Now, I begin to believe
That maybe, just maybe
He was playing a game with me
That he only pretenden to like me
Pretended to care and worry about me
And if it was a game
He got me
He got me good
And maybe
He sits in his room at night
Laughing
Laughing because he knows he got me
He doesn't think I know
But I do

So this girl
He says he really likes her
But I hope she sees past those beautiful conceiving blue eyes
And has the courage to say no
Say no becaue she knows better
I lived for 3 months in what I believe might have just been a really convincing relationship
But now it's over
And I can only hope
The she sees it sooner than I did
So she doesn't dig herself into a much deeper hole
A hole I can'r seem to get out of
Because
I still believe
And I still love
That lying blue-eyed bastard....... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lovelyhatred08 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I can only hope

Contributed by lovelyhatred08 on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:24:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I can only hope
That she won't fall for his convincing lines
I can only hope
That she will see through that
I was once lured intoo the lines he fed me
I began to think that he actually cared about me
That maybe,
He really liked me
I felt like I could tell him everything in the world
I felt safe in his arms
I cried many a time on his big shoulders,
Looked deeply into his beautiful blue eyes,
I even felt that we might last forever.
I know
That I really cared about him,
I worried about him
I cried over him
Now, I begin to believe
That maybe, just maybe
He was playing a game with me
That he only pretenden to like me
Pretended to care and worry about me
And if it was a game
He got me
He got me good
And maybe
He sits in his room at night
Laughing
Laughing because he knows he got me
He doesn't think I know
But I do

So this girl
He says he really likes her
But I hope she sees past those beautiful conceiving blue eyes
And has the courage to say no
Say no becaue she knows better
I lived for 3 months in what I believe might have just been a really convincing relationship
But now it's over
And I can only hope
The she sees it sooner than I did
So she doesn't dig herself into a much deeper hole
A hole I can'r seem to get out of
Because
I still believe
And I still love
That lying blue-eyed bastard.......

Copyright © lovelyhatred08 ... [ 2004-10-22 15:24:16]
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Re: I can only hope (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:49:33 PM AEST
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great write, and oh yes, oh yes, i believe it, i was with someone on and off for 5yrs, we were going to build a house, buy a jeep, live happily ever after and be married at sea no less lol, he ever wanted us to have a baby, well, he dumped me because hes a mommas boy, i kept tomatoes on the kitchen counter {and that wacked him out} and i guess i love my dogs a little too much for his liking, {they are much better company than he ever was lol} i have to believe i was only a game, to him, believe me, your better off without this looser, best wishes to you and keep your head held high, his loss not yours! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: I can only hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Minerrva on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 04:57:05 PM AEST
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Geez can I relate. I was just in a previous relationship with a guy who was just like the one you described. I was jipped for two months. Two months of nothing but lies and his stupid alternate reality. And the best part was, I played right into his little imaginary world. Don't let yourself be his broken hearted wish. You are the final piece to someone's puzzle and they are out there searching for you. By the way, great portrayal of emotion in your poem.

Re: I can only hope (User Rating: 1 )
by lovelyhatred08 on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:05:49 PM AEST
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Thanks guys. Everyone is telling me that yes he actually did like me and care for me and that he and i were something different than what they had seen him with before. but again i think it was all lies and alternate lifestyles. i think some guys just dont want to live in the reality of their own life. maybe he was just scared to really like someone

Re: I can only hope (User Rating: 1 )
by vicimgd1 on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:02:39 PM AEST
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So deep, so emotional. You really portrayed your feelings. I think you right, he probably didn't really love you.

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