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My Angel Smiles

Contributed by immortal_pain on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:38:30 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



See my angel as she walks through the halls,
All smiles and nothing more,
She’s lost everything,
Her family,
Her friends,
Her true love,
But still she smiles,
My angel smiles,
But your angel frowns,
My angel had nothing.....
But the smile that’s glued to her face,
Everyday she save a life,
While she destroys her own,
She says “misery surrounds us all,
And keeps us in a bind”,
But she smiles forever lasting,
Living a life of depression,
Agony,
Despair,
My angel smiles,
With her brown eyes and gold bland-ish hair,
See her laugh,
See her smile,
Watch as her face lights up,
You’d never guess what was on her mind,
Was the lost of her one true love,
My angel smiles,
Even though she has no one there to care,
My angel smiles,
As the thoughts of death hang in the air,
You wouldn’t believe the act my angel can put on,
She smiles she laughs,
She fools even her closest friends,
They thought she was fine that she was happy and bliss,
But my angel smiled,
As she lay distraught in a puddle of blood,
And my angel smiled,
Even though she lost her one true love,
“I loved him” she said,
“Truly I did”,
But my angel smiled,
When she was despair,
Her one true love flew her into the skies...
Where he dropped her in mid air,
“By his side I stood strong,
I gave the world my all,
He was my life my oxygen..... taken,
But still I stand strong and tall”,
My angel smiles,
Even though she’s given all she can,
My angel smiles,
She fools the world,
She fools her family and friends,
Watch as my angel walks through the halls,
She stands in the middle of a crowd,
Pulls a gun to her head and cocks it back in place,
She smiled with pleading eyes as tears danced cross her face,
She said “It’s all about strength,
And the power to give,
Just to have everything taken away”.





Copyright © immortal_pain ... [ 2004-10-22 11:38:30]
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Re: My Angel Smiles (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:40:48 AM AEST
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very sad write,sorry for your pain, very powerful write,

pixie xx


Re: My Angel Smiles (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 12:09:05 PM AEST
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I like how you put into words the way we can sometimes fool those around us..smile on the outside but being in pain on the outside..


Re: My Angel Smiles (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:36:04 PM AEST
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brilliant, amazing, powerful, well written, emotional, and outstanding write.

"Pulls a gun to her head and cocks it back in place,
She smiled with pleading eyes as tears danced cross her face,
She said “It’s all about strength,
And the power to give,
Just to have everything taken away”." truely powerful ending.


Re: My Angel Smiles (User Rating: 1 )
by immortal_pain on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:11:59 AM AEST
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thx for the comments guys ^_^


Re: My Angel Smiles (User Rating: 1 )
by SuchGreatHeights on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:16:42 PM AEST
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all of the comments already posted have beaten me to my praise of your poem. amazing endng, beautiful write. very sad, and i hope your friend is ok now.




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