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The Wind
Contributed by
thederangedcivilian
on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:14:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I look to the south and breathe out slowly.
Sometimes a small orange flame comes and licks my belly.
I smile and take a turn towards the north.
That’s when I see them.
Those creatures even more insignificant and minute than the fire blazing amongst the trees and the golden foliage beneath my flowing entity.
Once again I turn my head and turn to face the west.
Beyond lies a place that only I can see for I am the wind and the wind is me.
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2004-10-22 11:14:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 12:08:01 PM AEST (User
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a beautiful poem, awesome ryme painting vididly clear pictures, and a nice story within, cool feel. |
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Re: The Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:32:08 PM AEST (User
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beautfiul:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Honey56 on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 05:02:32 PM AEST (User
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Brilliant poem..
honey56 |
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