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Array ( [sid] => 68432 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Time For You To Die [time] => 2004-10-22 09:38:42 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I just don’t care anymore,
I’m finally walking out of that door,
Never again will I return,
I’ll live my life feeling the burn.

You can try & follow but you’ll fail,
I will lose you on my twisted trail,
For far too long have you been there,
I need someone around who cares.

You hang around my mind,
Looking for missing links to find,
Searching for somewhere to disappear,
Screaming your eerie words into my ear.

But your time is up this is your end,
I’ve learnt the hard way you’re not a friend
I listened to the voices & doubts,
That sent me insane made me scream & shout.

You prey on my moments of weakness,
You feel like you have been blessed,
As I am unstable & I am all over the place,
But this time I will get you out of my face.

I will use every inch of strength I have,
As I stand over your corpse I will laugh,
You are as ugly as the day is long,
You didn’t plan on my becoming so strong.

When you are gone you will not be missed,
I will stand over you with my clenched fist,
It is time for you to leave me alone & die,
As most of my life you have made me cry.

You tormented my fragile state,
I felt broken & you felt so great,
But tables are about to turn at last on you,
You will suffer for all that you’ve put me through.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 6 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Time For You To Die

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:38:42 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I just don’t care anymore,
I’m finally walking out of that door,
Never again will I return,
I’ll live my life feeling the burn.

You can try & follow but you’ll fail,
I will lose you on my twisted trail,
For far too long have you been there,
I need someone around who cares.

You hang around my mind,
Looking for missing links to find,
Searching for somewhere to disappear,
Screaming your eerie words into my ear.

But your time is up this is your end,
I’ve learnt the hard way you’re not a friend
I listened to the voices & doubts,
That sent me insane made me scream & shout.

You prey on my moments of weakness,
You feel like you have been blessed,
As I am unstable & I am all over the place,
But this time I will get you out of my face.

I will use every inch of strength I have,
As I stand over your corpse I will laugh,
You are as ugly as the day is long,
You didn’t plan on my becoming so strong.

When you are gone you will not be missed,
I will stand over you with my clenched fist,
It is time for you to leave me alone & die,
As most of my life you have made me cry.

You tormented my fragile state,
I felt broken & you felt so great,
But tables are about to turn at last on you,
You will suffer for all that you’ve put me through.




Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-10-22 09:38:42]
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Re: Time For You To Die (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 10:21:50 AM AEST
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Ah woe Pixie dear .
are you ok ?sounds like your having alot of hurt and issues .let me know if you need to talk i'll be here,
by the way awsome write.

hugs


Re: Time For You To Die (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 10:43:27 AM AEST
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wow... very descriptive. and strong. and your sure got your feelings out.. now will have to write a poem about.. you don't have to die.. not taking from this.. just switch the title and make it different hope you don't mind...


Re: Time For You To Die (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:04:25 AM AEST
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I'm sorry what you have been through Pixie
You wrote your feelings well...
life can ONLY get better just remember ...someone loves you just as you are!
cheers~


Re: Time For You To Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:31:51 AM AEST
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Pixie, I can't believe how angry you are in this one. Are you alright? I hope everything is ok. It's best to let the anger out Pixie, instead of letting it build up inside you. *HUGS* *S* Cynthia


Re: Time For You To Die (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 12:21:58 PM AEST
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Very emoitonal sad, and powerful write.
It's good that your letting the anger go by writing .
Blu




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