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Array ( [sid] => 68356 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I feel like… [time] => 2004-10-21 14:06:36 [hometext] => Just feeling down in the dumps again. [bodytext] => Confusion,
Mixed emotions.
Fixed on pain.
No more illusion,
But this feeling’s still the same.

This rotten feeling,
Where I’m being eaten away.
This drowning feeling,
I know is here to say.

I can’t stay firm,
I have to hurt.
And feel like dirt,
And be all alert.

I feel like…
I own no worth.
I feel…
Deprest,
And stressed.
And broken,
And disturbed…
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I feel like…

Contributed by deathdrop on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 02:06:36 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Confusion,
Mixed emotions.
Fixed on pain.
No more illusion,
But this feeling’s still the same.

This rotten feeling,
Where I’m being eaten away.
This drowning feeling,
I know is here to say.

I can’t stay firm,
I have to hurt.
And feel like dirt,
And be all alert.

I feel like…
I own no worth.
I feel…
Deprest,
And stressed.
And broken,
And disturbed…

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-10-21 14:06:36]
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Re: I feel like… (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:05:36 PM AEST
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i wish i could take away your heartache hun, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: I feel like… (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:07:47 PM AEST
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Wish I could take all the pain away...good poem. =)...blasting music can work miracles...

Re: I feel like… (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:18:13 PM AEST
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I know where you are coming from on this one.At the moment I feel like a mouse on a wheel, I do it because I have always done it, but never really sure why

Take care and hope you have better times soon

Steve

Re: I feel like… (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:39:36 PM AEST
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I feel like... that way to sometimes... we all do... whether we want to admit it or not...wish I could take it all away... but I can't... all I can do is pray for u... and offer my words of encouragement... and Simply love u as best I can from here!
Good poem... babe... jus write ur heartache away...
~Donna~

Re: I feel like… (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:02:35 PM AEST
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i am glad you are expressing yourself and i hope tht it is helping you on the inside. let it all out and it will help you heal inside... no matter how long it takes keep writing

Re: I feel like… (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 11:47:44 PM AEST
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Try the music of the Grateful Dead. You'll never be lost or lonely there. Let the music heal you sister. Much peace. I always look forward to seeing your poems. I know you're still alive when you're writing. Keep it up. Also check out the poetry of Robert Hunter he wrote alot of lyrics for the Grateful Dead. He's a great poet.

Re: I feel like… (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:31:00 AM AEST
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awww hun, I am sorry that your pain is still haunting you, I really hope that one day you will be able to let go of all the hurt and move on with your life, *hugs*

takecare

pixie xx

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