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Array ( [sid] => 68352 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DO WE TRY? [time] => 2004-10-21 13:04:16 [hometext] => THIS IS ABOUT MY HIGH SCHOOL SWEETHEART WE WERE TOGETHER FOR 5 YEARS I BROKE UP WITH HIM, WE REMAINED GOOD FRIENDS, BUT STARTED GETTING CLOSER AGAIN ABOUT 5 YEARS AFTER THE BREAKUP WHICH BRINGS ME TO THE PRESENT AND WRITING THIS POEM. [bodytext] => DOES HE FEEL FOR ME THE WAY I DO
IS IT WORTH WHAT I AM GOING THROUGH
COULD IT WORK, SHOULD WE TRY
OR AM I GOING TO BE THE ONE TO CRY
DO I RISK ANOTHER CHANCE
DO WE LET THIS FRIENDSHIP ADVANCE
IF IT WORKS THAT WOULD BE GREAT
AND WOULD BE WELL WORTH THE WAIT
BUT IT COULD FAIL AND END UP SAD
AND LOSE A FRIENDSHIP WE ONCE HAD
I GUESS WHAT WE SHOULD DO IS TAKE IT SLOW
BECAUSE IF WE DON'T TRY WE'LL NEVER KNOW
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 2 [informant] => irishgirl812 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

DO WE TRY?

Contributed by irishgirl812 on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 01:04:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

DOES HE FEEL FOR ME THE WAY I DO
IS IT WORTH WHAT I AM GOING THROUGH
COULD IT WORK, SHOULD WE TRY
OR AM I GOING TO BE THE ONE TO CRY
DO I RISK ANOTHER CHANCE
DO WE LET THIS FRIENDSHIP ADVANCE
IF IT WORKS THAT WOULD BE GREAT
AND WOULD BE WELL WORTH THE WAIT
BUT IT COULD FAIL AND END UP SAD
AND LOSE A FRIENDSHIP WE ONCE HAD
I GUESS WHAT WE SHOULD DO IS TAKE IT SLOW
BECAUSE IF WE DON'T TRY WE'LL NEVER KNOW

Copyright © irishgirl812 ... [ 2004-10-21 13:04:16]
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Re: DO WE TRY? (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:05:57 PM AEST
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Just wanted to let you know this poem is composed so perfectly. You have a great ability to pull your readers right inside of your heart as the emotion was felt. Listen to your heart and let it be your guide. Great poem and please keep the ink flowing. Your new reading fan.
MickeyPigKnuckles :o)

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