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I'm a murderer.
A ring of shame lies around my head.
I'm a murderer.
And I wish I were dead.
To kill something so innocent with so much life.
Why was I stupid enough to make the sacrifice?
Taking a child.s life who couldn't fight, all because I was raped one night.
Was I right to do what I did?
Or should I have left the little baby, grow up into a kid?
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I'm A Murderer

Contributed by addicted2selfharm on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 12:06:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm a murderer.
A ring of shame lies around my head.
I'm a murderer.
And I wish I were dead.
To kill something so innocent with so much life.
Why was I stupid enough to make the sacrifice?
Taking a child.s life who couldn't fight, all because I was raped one night.
Was I right to do what I did?
Or should I have left the little baby, grow up into a kid?

Copyright © addicted2selfharm ... [ 2004-10-21 12:06:59]
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Re: I'm A Murderer (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:31:41 PM AEST
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Whoa!!! Is this true to life? I commend u for tackling such a difficult subject... it's not an easy one to write about...
We all have our opinions on this and now is not the time to give mine... U have done a great job with this... keep writing... believe it or not... it does help easy the pain and regret!
~Donna~

Re: I'm A Murderer (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 10:39:54 PM AEST
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i agree this is a hard thing to talk about but a great wite indeed

Re: I'm A Murderer (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:11:53 PM AEST
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i wouldn't call you a murderer at all. infact, i think you did the child a favour. try to imagine how hard it might be bringing up a child with out a father there to support you and your baby... and what about every time you looked into the baby's eyes an saw the father staring back at you.
i know i wouldn't be able yo handle that but you may have different views...

Re: I'm A Murderer (User Rating: 1 )
by -Lord-Vince-Black- on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:44:44 AM AEST
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I dont think your wright,
You arent a murderer,
You didn't wanted the child,
So why keeping it??
And raise it without a dad??

Lord Vince Black

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